
11/15/2010 c1
2meowfactory
The Ken's Mother scene. Oh Lord. The Akihiko and Shinji scenes. Perfect. Your Mitsuru is brilliant.
This made me ache. :(

The Ken's Mother scene. Oh Lord. The Akihiko and Shinji scenes. Perfect. Your Mitsuru is brilliant.
This made me ache. :(
11/4/2010 c1
2Kaze Mirai
Aw, man, now I'm all sad. It was very well written, though, and the characters are spot-on.
I still wish Shinji was around for more than just one month. D:

Aw, man, now I'm all sad. It was very well written, though, and the characters are spot-on.
I still wish Shinji was around for more than just one month. D:
11/4/2010 c1 Powdy
I have to admit, that was really good. They're personalities and the events you added that weren't mentioned seemed to fit right into the story line, and made complete sense, too.
I have to admit, that was really good. They're personalities and the events you added that weren't mentioned seemed to fit right into the story line, and made complete sense, too.