for Uzumaki Chronicles: The Swirling Tides12/4/2024 c2 dixonjason403
how on earth are you THIS fucking bad at writing children characters?! why the fuck is a 6 year old talking like a fully grown adult?
how on earth are you THIS fucking bad at writing children characters?! why the fuck is a 6 year old talking like a fully grown adult?
12/4/2024 c1 dixonjason403
holy fuck the dialogue is bad. how the fuck is a 5 year old taking and acting like that? its absolutely retarded levels of bad writing.
holy fuck the dialogue is bad. how the fuck is a 5 year old taking and acting like that? its absolutely retarded levels of bad writing.
9/20/2024 c1 
2TheSlySage
just checking in, haven't seen ya in about a decade on here and was scrolling through old favorites. where ever you are and whatever you're doing. I hope you're doing well. signed, a reader who loved your story! i remember the website you made to post more about it and all that back in the day lol so thanks for writing, this was probably around the 3rd or so long format fic i picked up back in the day!
2TheSlySagejust checking in, haven't seen ya in about a decade on here and was scrolling through old favorites. where ever you are and whatever you're doing. I hope you're doing well. signed, a reader who loved your story! i remember the website you made to post more about it and all that back in the day lol so thanks for writing, this was probably around the 3rd or so long format fic i picked up back in the day!
8/14/2024 c26 Mohotton
Please continue this story i really want to see the rest of it! This story is amazing!
Please continue this story i really want to see the rest of it! This story is amazing!
7/24/2024 c3 Animeworld2.0
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7/7/2023 c26 ZeonSilt
The added thing with Mito and her brother plot really killed it for me ... would have still kept reading but truthfully that killed it for me. Though I did wonder about Mito now that i think about it... to bad you didn't continue your story.
The added thing with Mito and her brother plot really killed it for me ... would have still kept reading but truthfully that killed it for me. Though I did wonder about Mito now that i think about it... to bad you didn't continue your story.
7/7/2023 c21 ZeonSilt
So far found the first thing I dislike about the story ... Mito's condition and the brother thing ... ... ,,,, Xo
So far found the first thing I dislike about the story ... Mito's condition and the brother thing ... ... ,,,, Xo
3/21/2023 c24 2D11 Cosmic Studios
nonononononononononono no more explicity, ok it is toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much, please don't I am skipping evry lemon scene but there are too much
2D11 Cosmic Studiosnonononononononononono no more explicity, ok it is toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much, please don't I am skipping evry lemon scene but there are too much
3/16/2023 c3 D11 Cosmic Studios
Sage Mode is all summoners ability and Phoenix and Dragon are awesome
Sage Mode is all summoners ability and Phoenix and Dragon are awesome