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8/10/2020 c20 Guiltyofmycrimess
THis sucks btw
6/13/2020 c1 Morrow Walker
This. story was epic. Such a shame it got cancelled
6/13/2020 c1 Morrow Walker
For all the guys that say Naruto is weak cause he got his reptilian ass handed to him by Mei, remember that in cannon Gyuki and the Third Raikage fought of to a standstill
6/8/2020 c2 Guest
Bitch naruto
2/13/2020 c19 look2019
Good Chapter!
1/12/2020 c20 NazgulBelserion
This was a really cool idea for a short story that's fast paced sad it was dropped
3/28/2019 c20 4Monster King
Great job
1/4/2019 c1 11thunderofdeath97
no offense but you do know it is entirely the authors right to make the characters in their FANFICTION however they want right? i mean if they want him to grow some inches. gain more muscle, get longer hair, or use a sword then that is their choice entirely. i mean no disrespect or offense but it just annoys me when everyone tries to say how something should be done when they arent the ones writing the fic, now with that being said yes the readers do have the right to make some helpful point outs such as spelling, or giving an opinion on something if the author asks for it, or even asking about something, but there is no reason to get all insane and downright rude over it
9/28/2018 c5 Kingkong101
Bitch naruto
5/24/2018 c1 5Meito Uchiha
Where you describe that he created and split the Ten tails into nine beasts, isn't it the Creation of All things? Izanagi is that jutsu uchiha uses to warp illusion with reality.
12/3/2017 c20 Dinodogst
Did anyone adopt it? Id still like to read it
11/15/2017 c16 Meltricon12
naruto is so weak
11/13/2017 c20 Poe489
7/18/2017 c7 LOBBERDARK
That ending reminded me alot about Afro Samurai. Heh, I like where this is going.
5/29/2017 c20 Guest
You know to make this faster instead of giving up lamely. Try making naruto absorb other people's chakra like kaguya.
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