for Unintended Consequences1/15/2011 c17 
17MaraudingSnitch1314
Very nice chapter. Tricky Neal, pulling off an excellent double-cross. Peter's implicit trust in him just goes to show how far their partnership has grown. Keep up the great work!
17MaraudingSnitch1314Very nice chapter. Tricky Neal, pulling off an excellent double-cross. Peter's implicit trust in him just goes to show how far their partnership has grown. Keep up the great work!
1/15/2011 c17 4canadianscanget
Bravo! Keep 'er rolling. You have a good rhythm going with this this now. Really enjoyed this chapter (and 16) this tops it, let the words keep on a flowing.
4canadianscangetBravo! Keep 'er rolling. You have a good rhythm going with this this now. Really enjoyed this chapter (and 16) this tops it, let the words keep on a flowing.
1/9/2011 c16 17MaraudingSnitch1314
Good chapter. Hope that Grace will be okay; liked the Jones POV. :) Keep up the good work!
17MaraudingSnitch1314Good chapter. Hope that Grace will be okay; liked the Jones POV. :) Keep up the good work!
1/9/2011 c16 16morgo7kc
great chapter! i still cannot believing how fantastic your writing skills are. i hope Grace is ok!
16morgo7kcgreat chapter! i still cannot believing how fantastic your writing skills are. i hope Grace is ok!
1/1/2011 c15 97peppe1951
oh nooo! this was ending so good...why did someone have to shoot Grace,,,
I love it when Peter admitted that he loved Neal as a son...
97peppe1951oh nooo! this was ending so good...why did someone have to shoot Grace,,,
I love it when Peter admitted that he loved Neal as a son...
1/1/2011 c15 Georgiamomma123yahoo.com
Great update! Can't wait to find out what happened to Grace! Update soon, and Happy New Year!
Great update! Can't wait to find out what happened to Grace! Update soon, and Happy New Year!
12/31/2010 c15 17MaraudingSnitch1314
Nice chapter, although I think Peter's admission of loving Neal like a son was a bit much. ;) Otherwise, good work! Happy new year!
17MaraudingSnitch1314Nice chapter, although I think Peter's admission of loving Neal like a son was a bit much. ;) Otherwise, good work! Happy new year!
12/31/2010 c15 14Hailsy
Have I told you how much I love this story? If not, I LOVE this story. It's fantastic and I cannot wait for your updates.
Hayley
14HailsyHave I told you how much I love this story? If not, I LOVE this story. It's fantastic and I cannot wait for your updates.
Hayley
12/31/2010 c15 collarchick
omg those last second twists after being lulled into father/son tranquility get me every time! aarrrrggghhh!
omg those last second twists after being lulled into father/son tranquility get me every time! aarrrrggghhh!
12/27/2010 c14 13last1stnding
OK, Neal is running around unannounced at a ransom /hostage exchange in a black ski mask, waving a knife and then Peter has to be on the defensive for shooting him? Oh please! There's blame enough to go around for all - only Mozzie and Elizabeth are blameless. I'm sorry but the guys just didn't sound right in this chapter. Maybe its because the argument between them is so unusually bitter. Anyway, I hope the fighting is over and we can get back to the partnership again.
13last1stndingOK, Neal is running around unannounced at a ransom /hostage exchange in a black ski mask, waving a knife and then Peter has to be on the defensive for shooting him? Oh please! There's blame enough to go around for all - only Mozzie and Elizabeth are blameless. I'm sorry but the guys just didn't sound right in this chapter. Maybe its because the argument between them is so unusually bitter. Anyway, I hope the fighting is over and we can get back to the partnership again.
12/27/2010 c14 17MaraudingSnitch1314
Nicely written confrontation with good arguments from both Neal and Peter. Glad that they're on the mend. :)
17MaraudingSnitch1314Nicely written confrontation with good arguments from both Neal and Peter. Glad that they're on the mend. :)