for Unintended Consequences11/15/2010 c3 
17MaraudingSnitch1314
Great chapter! Love Mozzie's suspicion (which will probably save Neal's hide later) and Neal's determination to "save a life." Let's just hope Peter understands... Looking forward to Chapter 4!
17MaraudingSnitch1314Great chapter! Love Mozzie's suspicion (which will probably save Neal's hide later) and Neal's determination to "save a life." Let's just hope Peter understands... Looking forward to Chapter 4!
11/14/2010 c3 97peppe1951
I don't trust Frank...is this some plan of his to get Neal back for Neal not shooting that guard in the painting heist so many years ago?
97peppe1951I don't trust Frank...is this some plan of his to get Neal back for Neal not shooting that guard in the painting heist so many years ago?
11/14/2010 c3 13last1stnding
Interesting chapter; I loved Mozzie's reaction to Frank. Neal going off on his own for people who have their own agendas has the look of trouble. I am getting a bit anxious to get back to Peter though.
13last1stndingInteresting chapter; I loved Mozzie's reaction to Frank. Neal going off on his own for people who have their own agendas has the look of trouble. I am getting a bit anxious to get back to Peter though.
11/11/2010 c2 last1stnding
Another interesting chapter. I can't wait to see how this ties together with Peter's half of the story.
Another interesting chapter. I can't wait to see how this ties together with Peter's half of the story.
11/11/2010 c2 8VoicesInTheWind
Oh, interesting. I admit, I wasn't all that intrigued when I read the first chapter - Peter-centric fics are not really my thing - but with this other angle, you have me securely on your hook. I love a fic with people from Neal's past coming back, especially if their intentions are less than honorable. Can't wait to read more!
8VoicesInTheWindOh, interesting. I admit, I wasn't all that intrigued when I read the first chapter - Peter-centric fics are not really my thing - but with this other angle, you have me securely on your hook. I love a fic with people from Neal's past coming back, especially if their intentions are less than honorable. Can't wait to read more!
11/10/2010 c2 17MaraudingSnitch1314
Ooh, I don't like this Frank character already! Interesting storyline and while I'm generally not a fan of OCs, I'm curious to see what happens. =) Keep up the good work!
17MaraudingSnitch1314Ooh, I don't like this Frank character already! Interesting storyline and while I'm generally not a fan of OCs, I'm curious to see what happens. =) Keep up the good work!
11/8/2010 c1 4canadianscanget
Hey! It's here. Nice start. Looking forward to more chapters. Nothing run of the mill. ccg
4canadianscangetHey! It's here. Nice start. Looking forward to more chapters. Nothing run of the mill. ccg
11/7/2010 c1 10Tinnuial
Great beginning! The coded colours are intriguing. Can't wait to see where you take this :)
10TinnuialGreat beginning! The coded colours are intriguing. Can't wait to see where you take this :)
11/7/2010 c1 13last1stnding
This plot is a refreshing change and an interesting start. I'm intrigued as to who this mystery lady is from Peter's past. I look forward to more.
13last1stndingThis plot is a refreshing change and an interesting start. I'm intrigued as to who this mystery lady is from Peter's past. I look forward to more.
11/7/2010 c1 15yellowrose900
very interesting start, can't wait for the next chapter. I am very curious as to who the kidnapped woman is and what connection she has to Peter.
15yellowrose900very interesting start, can't wait for the next chapter. I am very curious as to who the kidnapped woman is and what connection she has to Peter.
11/6/2010 c1 17MaraudingSnitch1314
I'm interested! Like the premise of the mystery girl so far and the rainbow codes is a neat idea. I do wonder if Neal is sick, but can't Peter trust his partner a little bit more?
Good work so far and I look forward to an update. :)
17MaraudingSnitch1314I'm interested! Like the premise of the mystery girl so far and the rainbow codes is a neat idea. I do wonder if Neal is sick, but can't Peter trust his partner a little bit more?
Good work so far and I look forward to an update. :)