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11/15/2010 c3 17MaraudingSnitch1314
Great chapter! Love Mozzie's suspicion (which will probably save Neal's hide later) and Neal's determination to "save a life." Let's just hope Peter understands... Looking forward to Chapter 4!
11/14/2010 c3 97peppe1951
I don't trust this some plan of his to get Neal back for Neal not shooting that guard in the painting heist so many years ago?
11/14/2010 c3 13last1stnding
Interesting chapter; I loved Mozzie's reaction to Frank. Neal going off on his own for people who have their own agendas has the look of trouble. I am getting a bit anxious to get back to Peter though.
11/11/2010 c2 last1stnding
Another interesting chapter. I can't wait to see how this ties together with Peter's half of the story.
11/11/2010 c2 8VoicesInTheWind
Oh, interesting. I admit, I wasn't all that intrigued when I read the first chapter - Peter-centric fics are not really my thing - but with this other angle, you have me securely on your hook. I love a fic with people from Neal's past coming back, especially if their intentions are less than honorable. Can't wait to read more!
11/10/2010 c2 17MaraudingSnitch1314
Ooh, I don't like this Frank character already! Interesting storyline and while I'm generally not a fan of OCs, I'm curious to see what happens. =) Keep up the good work!
11/8/2010 c1 4canadianscanget
Hey! It's here. Nice start. Looking forward to more chapters. Nothing run of the mill. ccg
11/7/2010 c1 10Tinnuial
Great beginning! The coded colours are intriguing. Can't wait to see where you take this :)
11/7/2010 c1 13last1stnding
This plot is a refreshing change and an interesting start. I'm intrigued as to who this mystery lady is from Peter's past. I look forward to more.
11/7/2010 c1 15yellowrose900
very interesting start, can't wait for the next chapter. I am very curious as to who the kidnapped woman is and what connection she has to Peter.
11/7/2010 c1 26Stroma
Very good.
11/7/2010 c1 2Boxfin
Really like it so far! Really looking forward to more!

11/7/2010 c1 16morgo7kc
hmmmm…interesting. definetly looking for the next update
11/6/2010 c1 17MaraudingSnitch1314
I'm interested! Like the premise of the mystery girl so far and the rainbow codes is a neat idea. I do wonder if Neal is sick, but can't Peter trust his partner a little bit more?

Good work so far and I look forward to an update. :)
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