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1/23/2011 c1 Site Critic
Please erase this. PLEASE. Its awful.

You need to be banned from Fanfiction.net.
1/22/2011 c3 RJRRAA
LOVED IT SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH, PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ WRITE SOON.

My idea! Im glad you used it.
1/22/2011 c3 20Narcissa-Weasly
Hahahaha!
1/22/2011 c2 Narcissa-Weasly
Hahahahahaha!
1/22/2011 c1 Narcissa-Weasly
Hahaha! Really weird.
1/22/2011 c3 whitejewl
ohh! come onnnnnn!

3 mistakes in 3 chapters

first of all: Esme is not a bitch!

second: Alice would never buy shoes or any other thing from a sale!

and last but not the least: Emmett is not that stupid or childish that he would be happy finding a toy under his bed!
11/13/2010 c2 RJRRAA
LOVED IT SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH, PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ WRITE SOON.

Maybe the next chapter could be Rosalie like um staeling a baby because she thinks the parents left the baby but really the parents went to go get something from the car. Dont know if you want to use that or if Bella is in the story Rosalie could say that she wants to "bond" with Bella and Rosalie takes her to like the top of a mountain and leaves her there but then Alice see's what happens and tell the Cullens and then the Cullens come and get pissed at Rosalie and Roslaie id=s telling them it was a joke for April fools but Edward still wants to kill her but Emmett stops Edward before he does anything.

Bella would have to be human for my last idea or if she is a vampire already then it could be a memory.

LOVE what Alice said at the end.
11/13/2010 c2 3CloveNeedsaRealityCheck
These are pretty funny. You should write more.
11/7/2010 c1 RJRRAA
LOVED IT SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH, PLZ PLZ PLZ WRITE SOON.

Next chapter should be Alice going to the mall and getting into a fight for clothes and the cops some and arrest her and she has to go to jail and Esme and Carlise would have to pick her up because all the others are hunting.
11/7/2010 c1 Nicolehalescuito
HEY!~

this is a good idea, and you really should continue it~ :P I'm Now becoming an avid reader of your stories, good job!

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