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3PastOneonta
Interesting and different. Little bit of science with the supernatural. Jacob very well written. Edward running away makes it perfect.
3PastOneontaInteresting and different. Little bit of science with the supernatural. Jacob very well written. Edward running away makes it perfect.
12/31/2012 c1 2That'sMzPeachesTYVM
I think it would make a GREAT full-length story... fully fleshed out!
I am nearly finished writing my story, where Leah imprints on
Edward, and Bella turns to Jacob... I love the E/B pairing, but I
also love B/J. I am firmly team JakeWard! LMAO
2That'sMzPeachesTYVMI think it would make a GREAT full-length story... fully fleshed out!
I am nearly finished writing my story, where Leah imprints on
Edward, and Bella turns to Jacob... I love the E/B pairing, but I
also love B/J. I am firmly team JakeWard! LMAO
8/2/2011 c1 5Hotgirl1012
THAT was beautiful GemmaH I loved it, it reminds me of my boyfriend. quite alot of my boyfriend actually, not the whole vampire and werewolf thing, but sometimes i wonder if he could be 1 with his anger lmao, anyway I'm quite strong even if i dont look it and it reminds me of mine and his relationship, its forbidden literally, his mom doesnt know we're together nor do my parents, but its amazing, because we're best friends who fell in love...sometimes i wonder if it was for the best, but thinking of him shows me it was, I need to thank you, you brought back memories of us i didnt even remember until reading this story, I actually came to him one night and...I kinda did that slightly not saying too much lol, but my ex...he supported me and still does with my relationship even though sometimes i wonder why, but i know why now because he loves me. Just like Edward loves Bella he's still willing to let her go if it'll make her happy, and Jacob hell, he'd do anything for Bella even if her heart stopped beating...My ex is my edward in a way because he'd do anything to see me happy and my Jacob well he's my current boyfriend...Thank you :)
-Nuri Rose Adams (Hotgirl1012)
5Hotgirl1012THAT was beautiful GemmaH I loved it, it reminds me of my boyfriend. quite alot of my boyfriend actually, not the whole vampire and werewolf thing, but sometimes i wonder if he could be 1 with his anger lmao, anyway I'm quite strong even if i dont look it and it reminds me of mine and his relationship, its forbidden literally, his mom doesnt know we're together nor do my parents, but its amazing, because we're best friends who fell in love...sometimes i wonder if it was for the best, but thinking of him shows me it was, I need to thank you, you brought back memories of us i didnt even remember until reading this story, I actually came to him one night and...I kinda did that slightly not saying too much lol, but my ex...he supported me and still does with my relationship even though sometimes i wonder why, but i know why now because he loves me. Just like Edward loves Bella he's still willing to let her go if it'll make her happy, and Jacob hell, he'd do anything for Bella even if her heart stopped beating...My ex is my edward in a way because he'd do anything to see me happy and my Jacob well he's my current boyfriend...Thank you :)
-Nuri Rose Adams (Hotgirl1012)
7/19/2011 c1 bluemarbleplanet
I loved your story - I'm a big wolf fan and that's the first ff I've read where Bella and Jacob actually get together.
Most of the ff I read is AH and Jacob tends to be a secondary character in these stories so to read a story from JPOV was interesting and I thoroughly enjoyed it. The internal battle he was having with his initial feelings and then the contrasting feelings following the imprinting was fab and very well written!
I found you cos your review for "Seventeen Men" was posted under mine so I thought i'd click on your profile and check out your writing - glad i did!
I loved your story - I'm a big wolf fan and that's the first ff I've read where Bella and Jacob actually get together.
Most of the ff I read is AH and Jacob tends to be a secondary character in these stories so to read a story from JPOV was interesting and I thoroughly enjoyed it. The internal battle he was having with his initial feelings and then the contrasting feelings following the imprinting was fab and very well written!
I found you cos your review for "Seventeen Men" was posted under mine so I thought i'd click on your profile and check out your writing - glad i did!
11/15/2010 c1 4TwiCharmed
great job! i love the idea that jacob only imprinted on vamp bella. i loved everything about carlisle’s theory. im glad we didnt have to endure what was happening in the cullen house. i loved just having jacob’s pov. i loved how you wrote the imprint and the pull between the two of them. oh and i loved the lemon! thanks for entering the contest! :)
kari
4TwiCharmedgreat job! i love the idea that jacob only imprinted on vamp bella. i loved everything about carlisle’s theory. im glad we didnt have to endure what was happening in the cullen house. i loved just having jacob’s pov. i loved how you wrote the imprint and the pull between the two of them. oh and i loved the lemon! thanks for entering the contest! :)
kari
11/9/2010 c1 4Tim C. Girl
I'm finding myself surprisingly drawn to this challenge, considering that I really don't like Vamp!Bella stories as a rule..
But some of these stories have been very original, and yours is one of them - I like how you took the imprinting concept and explained how it could happen between Jake and Vamp!Bella. I also like that it didn't end up automatically being perfect - Jake resenting the lack of choice, Bella having to cut ties with the Cullens.
Very well written, as well. :) Great job!
4Tim C. GirlI'm finding myself surprisingly drawn to this challenge, considering that I really don't like Vamp!Bella stories as a rule..
But some of these stories have been very original, and yours is one of them - I like how you took the imprinting concept and explained how it could happen between Jake and Vamp!Bella. I also like that it didn't end up automatically being perfect - Jake resenting the lack of choice, Bella having to cut ties with the Cullens.
Very well written, as well. :) Great job!
11/8/2010 c1 26beckybrit
Even though I am E&B only and I never read anything else, your fics are the exception.
I loved this o/s, your writing is fab and I was hooked from the first paragraph. I even thought that Jacob & Bella were hot together ( sorry Edward! ).
Good luck in the competition!
*rushes off to console E*
26beckybritEven though I am E&B only and I never read anything else, your fics are the exception.
I loved this o/s, your writing is fab and I was hooked from the first paragraph. I even thought that Jacob & Bella were hot together ( sorry Edward! ).
Good luck in the competition!
*rushes off to console E*
11/8/2010 c1 Dangrdafne
Ok I did not know you wrote more after the agreement to the vaccine. WOW! Gemma that was amazing. I know so many people can't see Bella and Jacob together but I read each story as its own and this was amazing. It was clever, it was different, it was well thought out, it was funny, it was sad, and it was HOT! Gemma you never cease to amaze me. Thank you for sharing this early with me and now with the rest of Twitardia. Good luck in the contest!
Ok I did not know you wrote more after the agreement to the vaccine. WOW! Gemma that was amazing. I know so many people can't see Bella and Jacob together but I read each story as its own and this was amazing. It was clever, it was different, it was well thought out, it was funny, it was sad, and it was HOT! Gemma you never cease to amaze me. Thank you for sharing this early with me and now with the rest of Twitardia. Good luck in the contest!
11/8/2010 c1 2TwiWeasel
I realize that this is a touchy subject for some, but I thought you handled it beautifully! You really got a handle on Jake (hee hee) and you write him very well! I thought this flowed very well from the actual story. All in all, I think you did a great job! I know this was very nerve wracking for you, but I am soooooo glad you didn't just trash it! I have to say that this part "...any fears I may have had of her crushing me inside her faded..." totally made me laugh, but perhaps that's just my warped sense of humor. *wink* Wonderful job, Gem! I'm so proud of you!
2TwiWeaselI realize that this is a touchy subject for some, but I thought you handled it beautifully! You really got a handle on Jake (hee hee) and you write him very well! I thought this flowed very well from the actual story. All in all, I think you did a great job! I know this was very nerve wracking for you, but I am soooooo glad you didn't just trash it! I have to say that this part "...any fears I may have had of her crushing me inside her faded..." totally made me laugh, but perhaps that's just my warped sense of humor. *wink* Wonderful job, Gem! I'm so proud of you!
11/8/2010 c1 7joayla
Ok So I don't read Jake fics but I gave this a go. Just cause it was you and I was shocked in a good way. I love a good vamp story and was impressed how this plot worked and could have been!
Jake was hot to hun! Now that I feel like a bloody traitor! I will leave!
Thanks for a refreshingly different one shot!
7joaylaOk So I don't read Jake fics but I gave this a go. Just cause it was you and I was shocked in a good way. I love a good vamp story and was impressed how this plot worked and could have been!
Jake was hot to hun! Now that I feel like a bloody traitor! I will leave!
Thanks for a refreshingly different one shot!
11/7/2010 c1 TwiloveSue
Hey Gemma! This was... hmmmmm... it was really well done and I tried super hard to get past the "ick factor", but I'm a little ashamed to say I just couldn't. I liked the way you wrote the characters and still needed to read to know what happened to them, but was still too squicked out by the idea of Jacob & Bella together forever with Edward left heartbroken. Anyway, I think its a great chapter despite my preconceived prejudices :)
Hey Gemma! This was... hmmmmm... it was really well done and I tried super hard to get past the "ick factor", but I'm a little ashamed to say I just couldn't. I liked the way you wrote the characters and still needed to read to know what happened to them, but was still too squicked out by the idea of Jacob & Bella together forever with Edward left heartbroken. Anyway, I think its a great chapter despite my preconceived prejudices :)