8/29 c11 VryUnique
Thanks for the story. It was an original idea but there wasn't much of
a story line.
Thank you.
Thanks for the story. It was an original idea but there wasn't much of
a story line.
Thank you.
8/29 c9 VryUnique
Bella had made it sound like she was the ultimate protection for her mate but
I'm not sure how that could be when most of her kind couldn't protect themselves
from humans. How could Edward not know Aro was waiting inside the door?
Bella had made it sound like she was the ultimate protection for her mate but
I'm not sure how that could be when most of her kind couldn't protect themselves
from humans. How could Edward not know Aro was waiting inside the door?
8/29 c8 VryUnique
I would figure they would want to kill Bella, not ask her to join.
This is a lot happening in a couple of hours. Why is the Volturi
coming?
I would figure they would want to kill Bella, not ask her to join.
This is a lot happening in a couple of hours. Why is the Volturi
coming?
8/29 c7 VryUnique
Even after seeing how happy her brother is after being alone for so long
she still can't be happy for him.
Even after seeing how happy her brother is after being alone for so long
she still can't be happy for him.
8/29 c5 VryUnique
The thought of Edward sitting on Bella's lap is in no way appealing.
I hope they can at least be equals.
The thought of Edward sitting on Bella's lap is in no way appealing.
I hope they can at least be equals.
8/29 c3 VryUnique
It sounds like Bella knew what he was right away. I would have liked if
Edward went to school and latched onto Bella right in front of his siblings,
that would have been amusing.
It sounds like Bella knew what he was right away. I would have liked if
Edward went to school and latched onto Bella right in front of his siblings,
that would have been amusing.
8/29 c1 VryUnique
So Bella pretends to be 15 over and over again? And this time around
she is with Charlie and Renee?
So Bella pretends to be 15 over and over again? And this time around
she is with Charlie and Renee?
10/19/2020 c11 Debbie Hicks
12. Fall's Coming
then ALIEN RATTLESNAKES Bitten her hardest then fled transtioned then violently slipped control lost was like a newborn had powers Attacked best friends bitten marking with my own neck blood bonded was mated for life then to aliens/Vulcans/three with mated women /kids then then suddenly With two slew Volturi stepped surrendred pain her screams with my own with theirs tear them apart the executed with the Cullens/ both nuked freely then ripped brutalized see revealing by total exposure then Atomized violently by vaporizing brought there good slauhterd them for as all of them of this one broke treaty it's Void they are Punished but exiled from families se more Volturi guards then he reported Alice who done to her/him/they the Volturi then too late nuked wit us/them with they Pierced freely by popping freely but brought there see revealed of a mark onto necks mated illegally then Ripped into pieces by tearing as all of it blown more good they are beheaded they can't mate at all more than as all of them see more Volturi guards then Bella was different Alice she heals in a trance then then woke wild senses we ae here to help you all who did tpo them As the dawn of our day from as of our tomorrows from the time of the beginning as it is today it is now to you my husband it shall be who am I I Shall make my choice This One! Pointing coldly had lioness pointed ears upswept white Martian robes flowing but loose Vulcan Seleyan religious temple jewelry long expanded hair in a colif with three with bangs swirled sides vowed Revenge swearing Religious oaths of silence one turned up hand jeweled of her blood burned was in fact a priestess bonded to me for all eternity was not human
12. Fall's Coming
then ALIEN RATTLESNAKES Bitten her hardest then fled transtioned then violently slipped control lost was like a newborn had powers Attacked best friends bitten marking with my own neck blood bonded was mated for life then to aliens/Vulcans/three with mated women /kids then then suddenly With two slew Volturi stepped surrendred pain her screams with my own with theirs tear them apart the executed with the Cullens/ both nuked freely then ripped brutalized see revealing by total exposure then Atomized violently by vaporizing brought there good slauhterd them for as all of them of this one broke treaty it's Void they are Punished but exiled from families se more Volturi guards then he reported Alice who done to her/him/they the Volturi then too late nuked wit us/them with they Pierced freely by popping freely but brought there see revealed of a mark onto necks mated illegally then Ripped into pieces by tearing as all of it blown more good they are beheaded they can't mate at all more than as all of them see more Volturi guards then Bella was different Alice she heals in a trance then then woke wild senses we ae here to help you all who did tpo them As the dawn of our day from as of our tomorrows from the time of the beginning as it is today it is now to you my husband it shall be who am I I Shall make my choice This One! Pointing coldly had lioness pointed ears upswept white Martian robes flowing but loose Vulcan Seleyan religious temple jewelry long expanded hair in a colif with three with bangs swirled sides vowed Revenge swearing Religious oaths of silence one turned up hand jeweled of her blood burned was in fact a priestess bonded to me for all eternity was not human