for Oneshot: Speak Now!
62/22/2011 c1 sara
how sweet:)
how sweet:)
12/20/2010 c1 Nalaula
Oh that was wonderful! Um, I noticed that at the beginning you were switching from past and present tense, like 'I was' and "I'm". Just to let you know :) It was a good story and I liked it.
Oh that was wonderful! Um, I noticed that at the beginning you were switching from past and present tense, like 'I was' and "I'm". Just to let you know :) It was a good story and I liked it.
11/9/2010 c1 Cassadilla
This was okay. I have read many versions of this story, and I've been waiting or someone to write a whole story that leads up to this, and then continue with Edward and Bella's wedding complete with a sequel of their lives afterwards... I think that you have the potential to write that and make it good, so could you consider doing that? If someone else doesn't do it, then I may have to myself! Great story and great song :)
This was okay. I have read many versions of this story, and I've been waiting or someone to write a whole story that leads up to this, and then continue with Edward and Bella's wedding complete with a sequel of their lives afterwards... I think that you have the potential to write that and make it good, so could you consider doing that? If someone else doesn't do it, then I may have to myself! Great story and great song :)