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8/26/2014 c1 29machievelli
Posted July 12 2014, at the Starwarsknights web site and the Lucasforums Coruscant Entertainment Center in my The Critic's Two Cents.

KOTOR After Leviathan: Sometimes you just need to talk to each other

The piece was cute in it's own way. Everyone trying one after another to get Revan to cheer up, though you only see Canderous and Carth here. The author is correct about Carth, because he does flirt with a female Revan almost immediately, balanced with his 'I don't trust anyone' attitude, So the author just cut to the chase as it were.
8/7/2012 c1 17Dread-Pirate-Not-Roberts
Ha! Great story
I like Jolee:)
12/12/2010 c1 81Resacon1990
Don't you dare quit writing! This was great! You kept them all in character (Not that I know what your Revan is like XD) which was awesome! There where some grammar mistakes but those are easily fixed! Can't wait for your next piece!
11/8/2010 c1 8writtenrhythm
Great story! There were some minor grammar errors (i.e. drank instead of drunken) but really good with descriptions and emotions. I look foward to seeing what else you come up with. Keep writing!

-writtenrhythm

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