
2/27 c14 Guest
Fuck you, Alice, you pathetic freak
Fuck you, Alice, you pathetic freak
2/27 c16 Guest
The whining arrogant bitch Bella did NOT deserve Edward, she wasn't good enough, period.
The whining arrogant bitch Bella did NOT deserve Edward, she wasn't good enough, period.
10/6/2024 c16
6Cheerra12
Wow this story is absolutely amazing. It captures and holds the readers attention so easily. It is impressive how it can continue to attract readers even after over 10 years on this site. Truly inspiring work!

Wow this story is absolutely amazing. It captures and holds the readers attention so easily. It is impressive how it can continue to attract readers even after over 10 years on this site. Truly inspiring work!
9/24/2024 c1 Untidy Creature
Your writing is wondeful. The setting, the intensity, the charecters, the twiststurns to a resoultion all kept me hooked.
Your writing is wondeful. The setting, the intensity, the charecters, the twiststurns to a resoultion all kept me hooked.
1/15/2024 c16
6Swirlingtorments
Great story. I can appreciate that writing a story is a long, and hard commitment that is validated when people express a simple thanks. So, here I am, expressing my thanks. I hope you post again soon.
-Swirlingtorments

Great story. I can appreciate that writing a story is a long, and hard commitment that is validated when people express a simple thanks. So, here I am, expressing my thanks. I hope you post again soon.
-Swirlingtorments
1/3/2024 c15
1antiquelilium
This story is amazing. The maturity of character, the palpable tension amd chemistry between them. The way I’m able to actually FEEL the melancholy through the screen. I’ve been on a mission to read all your stories because I just love your writing and I’m so impressed by the variety of characters and different stories they have, yet such gripping stories each time. Everytime I start one i finish it within the day, who needs sleep?!

This story is amazing. The maturity of character, the palpable tension amd chemistry between them. The way I’m able to actually FEEL the melancholy through the screen. I’ve been on a mission to read all your stories because I just love your writing and I’m so impressed by the variety of characters and different stories they have, yet such gripping stories each time. Everytime I start one i finish it within the day, who needs sleep?!
4/21/2022 c16 RoBiNiSmYbOo
I haven’t read anything that really made me feel something I’m a long time. This was absolutely beautiful. You are an incredibly talented person, thank you for sharing your gift with us.
I haven’t read anything that really made me feel something I’m a long time. This was absolutely beautiful. You are an incredibly talented person, thank you for sharing your gift with us.
7/27/2021 c13 Guest
I think it's laughable how it's always about whether Edward deserves her. does she even deserve him?
I think it's laughable how it's always about whether Edward deserves her. does she even deserve him?