
1/17/2011 c13 tj2317
really you had to stop there what about jani sister do you ever talk about her any more? i liked her and wouldn't she have projected to she if her sister was there? im just saying and it is kind of easy to guess how jani is there loved it still plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon you left us with a cliff hanger this is the part of the book i would be awake all night to read
really you had to stop there what about jani sister do you ever talk about her any more? i liked her and wouldn't she have projected to she if her sister was there? im just saying and it is kind of easy to guess how jani is there loved it still plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon you left us with a cliff hanger this is the part of the book i would be awake all night to read
1/17/2011 c13 rugdg13
GAH! JANI? dsflsdj;fds needs update NOOWWW! fklsdfhwefnkdf.
Who is this chick? pleeeeaazze be jani!asfdsfceln My poor Embers has suffers too looonggg!1!1!1 Tell me mooress
Translation: *uses british accent*
as you can see, i am am quite anxious to know more about this intriguing tale you have spun. So would you kindly consider elaborating on this riveting tale? I wish to know if this mystery female is truly the heroine of the story, and i wish for it to not be a clever ruse on your part. My Dearest Embry has endured a substantial amount of pain that I can Barely tolerate any longer.
I shall await your continuation. *sips tea*
GAH! JANI? dsflsdj;fds needs update NOOWWW! fklsdfhwefnkdf.
Who is this chick? pleeeeaazze be jani!asfdsfceln My poor Embers has suffers too looonggg!1!1!1 Tell me mooress
Translation: *uses british accent*
as you can see, i am am quite anxious to know more about this intriguing tale you have spun. So would you kindly consider elaborating on this riveting tale? I wish to know if this mystery female is truly the heroine of the story, and i wish for it to not be a clever ruse on your part. My Dearest Embry has endured a substantial amount of pain that I can Barely tolerate any longer.
I shall await your continuation. *sips tea*
1/17/2011 c13 bloolagoonafairy
BONUS CHAPTER REVIEW
Man! You wouldn't belive how I reacted when I saw an update...actually you would actually believe me...what happened was I saw that you updated and screamed and my cousin who was sitting right next to me covered her ears and went to go get a pillow and smashed it in my face to shut me up but she missed and fell of the bed...lol
Anyways onward to the review!
Wait so basically while she was in the "Spirit World'' she had amnesia? And she was slowly getting her memory back? Gosh you never seis to surprise me!
BONUS CHAPTER REVIEW
Man! You wouldn't belive how I reacted when I saw an update...actually you would actually believe me...what happened was I saw that you updated and screamed and my cousin who was sitting right next to me covered her ears and went to go get a pillow and smashed it in my face to shut me up but she missed and fell of the bed...lol
Anyways onward to the review!
Wait so basically while she was in the "Spirit World'' she had amnesia? And she was slowly getting her memory back? Gosh you never seis to surprise me!
1/17/2011 c12
1Dimlylit
You scared me! I thought Embry would go all suicidal! But Jani is back? No? Yes? Update so I can know!

You scared me! I thought Embry would go all suicidal! But Jani is back? No? Yes? Update so I can know!
1/17/2011 c12
10the.love.that.binds
I knew she hadn't really died! Major cliffhanger! Please continue, I'm so excited to read what's happened!

I knew she hadn't really died! Major cliffhanger! Please continue, I'm so excited to read what's happened!
1/17/2011 c12 bloolagoonafairy
Awwwww I've never had anyone give a special thanks to me...that sounds like nobody appreciates me lol but you know what I mean XP HOLY TURD MONKEYS I ACTUALLY INSPIRED SOMEONE! Whoa...*runs and go tells mom*...
Hmmmmmm I do not assume what will happen next in a disrespectful manner! At least that's what I think...But that's ME for ya ;)
Anyways onwards to the review!...Again I call you, 'YOU EVIL PERSON!' You made me cry...made my heart feel heavy...meany...crap that sounded kinda deep...hmmmmmmm I wonder...did Jani do the Taha Aki thing? I sense that she did... Anyways Awesome as always even though you made cry...Poo-poo head.
~JazzyPants
Awwwww I've never had anyone give a special thanks to me...that sounds like nobody appreciates me lol but you know what I mean XP HOLY TURD MONKEYS I ACTUALLY INSPIRED SOMEONE! Whoa...*runs and go tells mom*...
Hmmmmmm I do not assume what will happen next in a disrespectful manner! At least that's what I think...But that's ME for ya ;)
Anyways onwards to the review!...Again I call you, 'YOU EVIL PERSON!' You made me cry...made my heart feel heavy...meany...crap that sounded kinda deep...hmmmmmmm I wonder...did Jani do the Taha Aki thing? I sense that she did... Anyways Awesome as always even though you made cry...Poo-poo head.
~JazzyPants
1/17/2011 c12 crazivamp15
i hate you for doing a cliffhanger:) i love this though.seriously i havent read a good embry imprint story until yours. seriously i love it. its a very good plot line and very put together. keep updating please:)
i hate you for doing a cliffhanger:) i love this though.seriously i havent read a good embry imprint story until yours. seriously i love it. its a very good plot line and very put together. keep updating please:)
1/8/2011 c11 bloolagoonafairy
YOU KILLED HER! YOU EVIL PERSON! 0.0 oh poor Embry...gonna suffer for days...months...years...decades...etc..
In my mind I think Jani is gonna like probably pull something like Taha Aki(I think that's the right dude?) but maybe with a different animal...Ooo maybe be a panther...or Mountain Lion!
YOU KILLED HER! YOU EVIL PERSON! 0.0 oh poor Embry...gonna suffer for days...months...years...decades...etc..
In my mind I think Jani is gonna like probably pull something like Taha Aki(I think that's the right dude?) but maybe with a different animal...Ooo maybe be a panther...or Mountain Lion!
1/2/2011 c10 Randomness
I CAN'T BELIVE U KILLED HER! Please save her somehow! Alow her 2 B with Embry somehow!
I CAN'T BELIVE U KILLED HER! Please save her somehow! Alow her 2 B with Embry somehow!
1/2/2011 c11 I know too much
Dude, it's obvious as what's gonna happen. She is gonna astral project and make her self visible, and get so good at it that she can stay visible and touchable for ever, or something.
Dude, it's obvious as what's gonna happen. She is gonna astral project and make her self visible, and get so good at it that she can stay visible and touchable for ever, or something.
1/1/2011 c11 rugdg13
MONTHs? YEARS? NO...you cant torture him THAT long...
come on now...it will torture him AND the entire wolf pack. (they will feel Every bit of sadness that he feels)
She has to find a way back into a body SOMEHOW.
(you know naruto the Anime? (Or Stephenie's meyer's book The Host?) maybe She can pull an Ino/Wanda and control a body.)
But she has to get back to him AnD her lil sister soon. D:
MONTHs? YEARS? NO...you cant torture him THAT long...
come on now...it will torture him AND the entire wolf pack. (they will feel Every bit of sadness that he feels)
She has to find a way back into a body SOMEHOW.
(you know naruto the Anime? (Or Stephenie's meyer's book The Host?) maybe She can pull an Ino/Wanda and control a body.)
But she has to get back to him AnD her lil sister soon. D: