for Extent of Power11/18/2013 c1 
2HetaPoke4Evr
That was really good! Really good - you kept everyone SO in character! However, is there a way to read the ending and sex part still? I would really like to see how you had this end!; Thank you and also great work! _
2HetaPoke4EvrThat was really good! Really good - you kept everyone SO in character! However, is there a way to read the ending and sex part still? I would really like to see how you had this end!; Thank you and also great work! _
6/26/2013 c1 5Retiredwriter1809
I've been away from the DBZ fandom for some time now...probably three years! But alas, old obsessions come back. I took a chance and strayed away from my usual safe fanfic home of AFFnet...and decided to see if there were any decent dbz fics on this site. After a long search, I was quite happy to have found this one!
If it's angsty I'll like it. If it's well-written and true to character...I will like it even more! I'll be searching for the 'missing parts' of this story on AFFnet, because, damn, I greatly enjoyed what I've read so far. I look forward to reading your other Vegeta fanfics, as well. Good to see that there are still great dbz fanficcers still around. Great stuff!
5Retiredwriter1809I've been away from the DBZ fandom for some time now...probably three years! But alas, old obsessions come back. I took a chance and strayed away from my usual safe fanfic home of AFFnet...and decided to see if there were any decent dbz fics on this site. After a long search, I was quite happy to have found this one!
If it's angsty I'll like it. If it's well-written and true to character...I will like it even more! I'll be searching for the 'missing parts' of this story on AFFnet, because, damn, I greatly enjoyed what I've read so far. I look forward to reading your other Vegeta fanfics, as well. Good to see that there are still great dbz fanficcers still around. Great stuff!
3/25/2013 c1 Alana
This is so cool. (I'm messed up like that.)
Is it published under the same title on AFFnet?
This is so cool. (I'm messed up like that.)
Is it published under the same title on AFFnet?
12/29/2012 c1 Guest
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3/30/2012 c1 11AylaWilson16
loved it! I have no doubt in my mind that this kind of thing went on all the time for poor vegeta while working Frieza...I've read this version and your other unedited version :) both are amazing and dark. Both Frieza and vegeta are in character and i really liked the short conversations between Krillin and Frieza! poor poor vegeta...great job!
11AylaWilson16loved it! I have no doubt in my mind that this kind of thing went on all the time for poor vegeta while working Frieza...I've read this version and your other unedited version :) both are amazing and dark. Both Frieza and vegeta are in character and i really liked the short conversations between Krillin and Frieza! poor poor vegeta...great job!
2/2/2012 c1 Guest
You've got to be kidding me, I was so excited to read this, and when I saw the end I got so pissed :( time to go search for the sex scene
You've got to be kidding me, I was so excited to read this, and when I saw the end I got so pissed :( time to go search for the sex scene
11/13/2011 c1 1IRandomI
I don't how you do it but you make it realistic and I don't know why but I love this story please where can I find the end?
1IRandomII don't how you do it but you make it realistic and I don't know why but I love this story please where can I find the end?
6/29/2011 c1 2cara9001
nice story =) it was really sad at the sex scene and very graphic i was defiantly floored, anyway i love the story
2cara9001nice story =) it was really sad at the sex scene and very graphic i was defiantly floored, anyway i love the story
5/18/2011 c1 abcdefghijkmnopqrstuvwxyz
:O...O...M..G...THAT WAS AMAZING~, perfect build up man, you kept them iun charecter, and you made a kicka-ass plot for it and you followed through, nice ^^/, although I was balling my eyes out when there was no sex part -.-"m but that still didnt hold it back from beeing a great fic ^3^/ good job
:O...O...M..G...THAT WAS AMAZING~, perfect build up man, you kept them iun charecter, and you made a kicka-ass plot for it and you followed through, nice ^^/, although I was balling my eyes out when there was no sex part -.-"m but that still didnt hold it back from beeing a great fic ^3^/ good job
1/25/2011 c1 Blue's girl
Great story, but it would really help if you could tell us WHERE on AFF we can find the rest. Name of the story and your user-name would really help.
I want to read the rest so badly, but I can't seem to find it on AFF! =(
Great story, but it would really help if you could tell us WHERE on AFF we can find the rest. Name of the story and your user-name would really help.
I want to read the rest so badly, but I can't seem to find it on AFF! =(
12/26/2010 c1 Lady-Alucard
I have already read many torture fanfictions, but I must admit that this one is pretty sick.
Please dont feel offended by it, its meant in a good way.
The way you write makes me stop reading every few lines to catch my breath before I can read on xD
I havent read the end yet, but this really makes me wish that somebody at least tries to help Vegeta.
I mean, how can those three just watch, when at least Krillin must know perfectly well what is going on?
But I do have a question: Where is Piccolo? He was also there when Vegeta was being beaten by Frieza.
I have already read many torture fanfictions, but I must admit that this one is pretty sick.
Please dont feel offended by it, its meant in a good way.
The way you write makes me stop reading every few lines to catch my breath before I can read on xD
I havent read the end yet, but this really makes me wish that somebody at least tries to help Vegeta.
I mean, how can those three just watch, when at least Krillin must know perfectly well what is going on?
But I do have a question: Where is Piccolo? He was also there when Vegeta was being beaten by Frieza.
11/29/2010 c1 251Aryana
But I simply MUST read the whole thing! Is it posted on AFFnet yet? Can you send me a link? Or send me a link when it is posted? Or mail me the story? PLEASE? I MUST READ IT! IT IS WRITTEN SO TERRIBLY WELL!
251AryanaBut I simply MUST read the whole thing! Is it posted on AFFnet yet? Can you send me a link? Or send me a link when it is posted? Or mail me the story? PLEASE? I MUST READ IT! IT IS WRITTEN SO TERRIBLY WELL!
11/17/2010 c1 destinyxdenied
This is amazing. I really like the relationship between Frieza and Vegeta. You also did a great job voicing Krillin. A lot of people don't hit him spot on. If you could let me know when the end is up that'd be great. Take care.
This is amazing. I really like the relationship between Frieza and Vegeta. You also did a great job voicing Krillin. A lot of people don't hit him spot on. If you could let me know when the end is up that'd be great. Take care.