for Fire and Ice9/23/2012 c19 flowerdork
Loved it! I thought Will and Riley would be the cutest couple... then Abby had to come along :( oh well, I still think your story's awesome and can you please update soon?!
Loved it! I thought Will and Riley would be the cutest couple... then Abby had to come along :( oh well, I still think your story's awesome and can you please update soon?!
8/26/2011 c18 Sage Q
love it!
what happened to Kate?
cant wait till John's back!
love it!
what happened to Kate?
cant wait till John's back!
5/11/2011 c17 
26melissaadams22
Hey there,
Feeling a bit better today, I can at least taste stuff again. LOL In between my misery I read. LOL
GREAT story/update and I loved it. It was truly MARVELOUS honestly. :D :)
Thanks,
Melissa
26melissaadams22Hey there,
Feeling a bit better today, I can at least taste stuff again. LOL In between my misery I read. LOL
GREAT story/update and I loved it. It was truly MARVELOUS honestly. :D :)
Thanks,
Melissa
3/25/2011 c15 melissaadams22
Hey there,
WOW what a COOL update/story. *Grins happily while sipping a nice hot drink cause it's chilly here on the East Coast*
NICE job on this, I thoroughly enjoyed it. GREAT work, *Passes out cookies and milk* TERRIFIC job.
Thanks so much,
Melissa
Hey there,
WOW what a COOL update/story. *Grins happily while sipping a nice hot drink cause it's chilly here on the East Coast*
NICE job on this, I thoroughly enjoyed it. GREAT work, *Passes out cookies and milk* TERRIFIC job.
Thanks so much,
Melissa
1/8/2011 c13 4Zenheim Panda
Hey! Long time no see! :D Sorry I've been inactive; winter break was busy for me, and I didn't have time to watch Sanctuary, so I caught up this morning. :) Anyway, I enjoyed these chapters! I can't wait to see what happens with Helen and Riley when they talk about James. ^^ My one criticism would be Kate's lack of appearances in these chapters. I noticed Riley took a lot of her lines and places in interactions, but I think Riley is a strong enough character to have her own. :) Anyway, can't wait for more!
4Zenheim PandaHey! Long time no see! :D Sorry I've been inactive; winter break was busy for me, and I didn't have time to watch Sanctuary, so I caught up this morning. :) Anyway, I enjoyed these chapters! I can't wait to see what happens with Helen and Riley when they talk about James. ^^ My one criticism would be Kate's lack of appearances in these chapters. I noticed Riley took a lot of her lines and places in interactions, but I think Riley is a strong enough character to have her own. :) Anyway, can't wait for more!
1/7/2011 c14 Song of Scrios
man the mid-season finale got to me... and then it's not coming back til april!
can't wait for the next update!
man the mid-season finale got to me... and then it's not coming back til april!
can't wait for the next update!
1/7/2011 c14 26melissaadams22
Hey there,
*Waves at you happily* Colder than heck here and I got a toothache DA** IT! Your story was a ray of sunshine, I loved it. It was fantastic, truly and I really enjoyed it a whole, whole, WHOLE bunch.
Melissa
26melissaadams22Hey there,
*Waves at you happily* Colder than heck here and I got a toothache DA** IT! Your story was a ray of sunshine, I loved it. It was fantastic, truly and I really enjoyed it a whole, whole, WHOLE bunch.
Melissa
12/21/2010 c12 bobcats
I'm really enjoying your story and am curious to see where you take it. One nitpick, and it's a pretty big one, is that you continually use the word "smirk"-all the time. Please find another word or just omit the facial cues alltogether.
I'm really enjoying your story and am curious to see where you take it. One nitpick, and it's a pretty big one, is that you continually use the word "smirk"-all the time. Please find another word or just omit the facial cues alltogether.
12/21/2010 c13 melissaadams22
Hi there,
YAY an update. *Gives off wide grin* A nice treat among all the miserable weather of December, snow is better on postcards. LOL
NICE work on this, reward yourself with a cookie! :)
Melissa
Hi there,
YAY an update. *Gives off wide grin* A nice treat among all the miserable weather of December, snow is better on postcards. LOL
NICE work on this, reward yourself with a cookie! :)
Melissa
12/20/2010 c12 melissaadams22
Hi there,
*Shivers a bit and hugs a mug of cocoa* OOH it's chilly, but then again it is almost Christmas :D
This was a fantastic early holiday present, I really enjoyed it so nice work. Thanks.
Thank you muchly,
Melissa
Hi there,
*Shivers a bit and hugs a mug of cocoa* OOH it's chilly, but then again it is almost Christmas :D
This was a fantastic early holiday present, I really enjoyed it so nice work. Thanks.
Thank you muchly,
Melissa
12/19/2010 c11 4Zenheim Panda
D: Aww. This was super intense. I hope Riley lets Will have it some time soon about what he did to Helen! D After that they can be as lovey-dovey as they want. :D
4Zenheim PandaD: Aww. This was super intense. I hope Riley lets Will have it some time soon about what he did to Helen! D After that they can be as lovey-dovey as they want. :D
12/19/2010 c11 26melissaadams22
Hey there,
AW what a sweet holiday present before the actual holiday. LOL This is GREAT, I thoroughly enjoyed it from word one so please keep up the FANTASTIC work and early Merry Christmas to you. :D
Melissa
26melissaadams22Hey there,
AW what a sweet holiday present before the actual holiday. LOL This is GREAT, I thoroughly enjoyed it from word one so please keep up the FANTASTIC work and early Merry Christmas to you. :D
Melissa
12/18/2010 c10 melissaadams22
Hey there,
*Waves at you happily* Wow I'm just exhausted from the Sanctuary mid season finale last night...WHEW...wow. At least according to the main SyFy site here in the US they're returning next year but not till April.
At least we have GREAT fan fiction like this to keep us happy though! A great little Christmas present early and I ADORED it so thank you, thank you, thank you.
Melissa
Hey there,
*Waves at you happily* Wow I'm just exhausted from the Sanctuary mid season finale last night...WHEW...wow. At least according to the main SyFy site here in the US they're returning next year but not till April.
At least we have GREAT fan fiction like this to keep us happy though! A great little Christmas present early and I ADORED it so thank you, thank you, thank you.
Melissa
12/17/2010 c10 4Zenheim Panda
Oh god! This is causing me as much anxiety as it did when I watched it. I hate that Helen is dying! I hope Riley/Kira really kicks ass. I also want to know who was watching her with Adam. Anyway, I'm really interested to see how Helen takes the news of who Riley really is! Great job. ^^
4Zenheim PandaOh god! This is causing me as much anxiety as it did when I watched it. I hate that Helen is dying! I hope Riley/Kira really kicks ass. I also want to know who was watching her with Adam. Anyway, I'm really interested to see how Helen takes the news of who Riley really is! Great job. ^^