for STARING GAME12/21/2010 c1 defunctaccounttexmon
WHAT CAN I SAY UR CLOMSY.
Aside from the rampant capsrape, the spelling in this is absolutely horrendous. In the first sentence alone, someone (I can't tell who it is) seems to have spotted a hurricane of bells tearing apart the last delicatessen on earth. And I don't think anyone, anywhere wants to see someone that's "Ass-necked" unless they're a freakshow carnival talent scout.
Spelling and grammar is paramount. Really. I can't tell who's speaking or what they're even talking about, because the grammar and spelling are so atrocious that they share nothing in common with the english language!
I don't think it's humanly possible to genuinely be this bad.
Ergo...
you = TROLL.
WHAT CAN I SAY UR CLOMSY.
Aside from the rampant capsrape, the spelling in this is absolutely horrendous. In the first sentence alone, someone (I can't tell who it is) seems to have spotted a hurricane of bells tearing apart the last delicatessen on earth. And I don't think anyone, anywhere wants to see someone that's "Ass-necked" unless they're a freakshow carnival talent scout.
Spelling and grammar is paramount. Really. I can't tell who's speaking or what they're even talking about, because the grammar and spelling are so atrocious that they share nothing in common with the english language!
I don't think it's humanly possible to genuinely be this bad.
Ergo...
you = TROLL.
11/10/2010 c1 
1A Monochrome World
O_O I don't be mean to be offensive or flame, but...this was weird and made no sense. Seriously, is this even a DBZ fic? And you shouldn't write evrything in CAPS...why the heck were you doing that? Because of the grammar and spelling I could hardly distinguish your English from a foreign language. Um yeah, this was just...strange...
1A Monochrome WorldO_O I don't be mean to be offensive or flame, but...this was weird and made no sense. Seriously, is this even a DBZ fic? And you shouldn't write evrything in CAPS...why the heck were you doing that? Because of the grammar and spelling I could hardly distinguish your English from a foreign language. Um yeah, this was just...strange...
11/9/2010 c1 Guest
i dont get it. what r u saying?
- Alex
i dont get it. what r u saying?
- Alex