for Jewel of His Heart4/4/2017 c19 Rangerrainbow
Gahhhh! I can't wait to read more! I love this story so much xoxoxoxoxox
Gahhhh! I can't wait to read more! I love this story so much xoxoxoxoxox
3/22/2017 c19 
1Elreka-28
I love this book! God if you had this printed I would be 1st in line to buy it!
1Elreka-28I love this book! God if you had this printed I would be 1st in line to buy it!
3/13/2017 c19 6Nyght elf
A good chapter! Thx for updating! I am glad she survived! And they are made yay! Will eagerly wait the last chapter and epilogue! Thx again! Take care!
6Nyght elfA good chapter! Thx for updating! I am glad she survived! And they are made yay! Will eagerly wait the last chapter and epilogue! Thx again! Take care!
3/2/2017 c18 Guest
Your killing me with this suspense bro..
But i still totally adore it Xp
Cant wait for the nezt chapter!
Love your reader
Julez
Your killing me with this suspense bro..
But i still totally adore it Xp
Cant wait for the nezt chapter!
Love your reader
Julez
3/3/2017 c12 2Wren210
I'm done... sorry I can't continue reading your story... you are taking too many things from Terry Goodkind... you should really try to be more original in your story...
2Wren210I'm done... sorry I can't continue reading your story... you are taking too many things from Terry Goodkind... you should really try to be more original in your story...
3/3/2017 c11 Wren210
you do realize that Sesshomaru contradicted himself... first he orders Kagome to protect Shippo and then he says he isn't important...
and why are they so formal with each other and why does Shippo insist that Kagome call him Hikaru... they are acting more like strangers than friends...
you do realize that Sesshomaru contradicted himself... first he orders Kagome to protect Shippo and then he says he isn't important...
and why are they so formal with each other and why does Shippo insist that Kagome call him Hikaru... they are acting more like strangers than friends...
3/3/2017 c10 Wren210
great plagiarism... the story was great until you started mentioning the chimes from Terry Goodkind... it was bad enough with the names from DragonRider - Ann McCaffrey
changing the prophesy around a little didn't change it all that much and seriously the white blade...
though I must say Faith of the Fallen was my favorite...
great plagiarism... the story was great until you started mentioning the chimes from Terry Goodkind... it was bad enough with the names from DragonRider - Ann McCaffrey
changing the prophesy around a little didn't change it all that much and seriously the white blade...
though I must say Faith of the Fallen was my favorite...
2/28/2017 c11 1Darknessdawns
I tend to wait until I finish or catch up to the current chapter to review. However I found it necessary to review earlier on this one. I do believe chapter 10 and 11 have been switched in order. Chapter 10 mentions the assassination attempt but it actually happens in chapter 11. I have to admit I was rather confused when I noticed this and thought you would like to know. Over all I am loving this story and will leave a true review when I get to the end of the posted chapters.
1DarknessdawnsI tend to wait until I finish or catch up to the current chapter to review. However I found it necessary to review earlier on this one. I do believe chapter 10 and 11 have been switched in order. Chapter 10 mentions the assassination attempt but it actually happens in chapter 11. I have to admit I was rather confused when I noticed this and thought you would like to know. Over all I am loving this story and will leave a true review when I get to the end of the posted chapters.