for It's in My Blood2/19/2011 c7 
1NintEnzo
DUNN DUNN...sigh dunn. I'm sorry but, I kinda want some action already. I know it's your story and you can do what you want with it and all, but it's taking a long time to get the action. I like you updating a lot but add a pinch of action to spice up the stew of story. Like in the movie it started with that awesome scene with the dragons attacking and Hiccup catching Toothless with the cannon. Didn't that draw you in and make you feel intrigued? All in all it was an ok chapter (I wonder what Taz's specialty is... =D) but it could've been better. Keep updating!
1NintEnzoDUNN DUNN...sigh dunn. I'm sorry but, I kinda want some action already. I know it's your story and you can do what you want with it and all, but it's taking a long time to get the action. I like you updating a lot but add a pinch of action to spice up the stew of story. Like in the movie it started with that awesome scene with the dragons attacking and Hiccup catching Toothless with the cannon. Didn't that draw you in and make you feel intrigued? All in all it was an ok chapter (I wonder what Taz's specialty is... =D) but it could've been better. Keep updating!
2/19/2011 c7 bomrocks23
WAZZZZZZZUP! Nice chapter, who is the baby dragon? I KNOW! I KNOW! It is part Nightfury and bat and has spiderwebs and an automatic window cleanig device! Or is it...
WAZZZZZZZUP! Nice chapter, who is the baby dragon? I KNOW! I KNOW! It is part Nightfury and bat and has spiderwebs and an automatic window cleanig device! Or is it...
1/12/2011 c6 leyla77
ehe i reall love your story. i think that youve wriiten my character perfectly. i cant wait till the next chapter
ehe i reall love your story. i think that youve wriiten my character perfectly. i cant wait till the next chapter
1/12/2011 c6 bomrocks23
I just noticed i didnt give my dragon a name!
Name: Charge
Species: Bore horn
I just noticed i didnt give my dragon a name!
Name: Charge
Species: Bore horn
1/10/2011 c6 NintEnzo
EXCITEMENT! =D Now that I got that out of my system, great chapter! When I read the part with the cube through the end of the chapter I was like =O then I was like =D then like XD Keep writing!
EXCITEMENT! =D Now that I got that out of my system, great chapter! When I read the part with the cube through the end of the chapter I was like =O then I was like =D then like XD Keep writing!
1/10/2011 c6 Bomrocks23
WUZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZUP! I cant wait for next chapter! When are the dragons gonna come in! :). Next chapter will be full of awesomeness, running around, with more chips! Yay Chips! :) Ps Im a happpppppppppppy!
WUZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZUP! I cant wait for next chapter! When are the dragons gonna come in! :). Next chapter will be full of awesomeness, running around, with more chips! Yay Chips! :) Ps Im a happpppppppppppy!
1/10/2011 c6 galeforcewinds12
I like it! I am curious to find out why my OC Aspen is so standoffish! I like how you wrote it even though it was a leetle short:) I hope your finals go good and I can't wait for the next chapter!
I like it! I am curious to find out why my OC Aspen is so standoffish! I like how you wrote it even though it was a leetle short:) I hope your finals go good and I can't wait for the next chapter!
12/26/2010 c1 cloverblade103
Woops forgot to add mah dragon OC's personality!
Calm and impulsive, can easily get you out of a fix but is known to be too on edge.
See you later!
-Kalamari;)-
Woops forgot to add mah dragon OC's personality!
Calm and impulsive, can easily get you out of a fix but is known to be too on edge.
See you later!
-Kalamari;)-
12/26/2010 c5 cloverblade103
Me likes your story! I hope you accept my OC;)
Name: Azalea
Appearance: 5'0, ice blue eyes, and shoulder length blonde hair.
Personality: Clever and elusive at times but for the most part, smart and outgoing.
-Dragon-
Name: Fuze
Species: Aquatic Burn
Appearance: Shimmering water like blue, has nightfury face, medium elegant wings, and a fishes tail.
Abilities: Can swim, can breathe air and water, and shoots blue fire that is wet but bursts into flames.
Well I hope you like it and keep up the good work!
-Kalamari ;)-
Me likes your story! I hope you accept my OC;)
Name: Azalea
Appearance: 5'0, ice blue eyes, and shoulder length blonde hair.
Personality: Clever and elusive at times but for the most part, smart and outgoing.
-Dragon-
Name: Fuze
Species: Aquatic Burn
Appearance: Shimmering water like blue, has nightfury face, medium elegant wings, and a fishes tail.
Abilities: Can swim, can breathe air and water, and shoots blue fire that is wet but bursts into flames.
Well I hope you like it and keep up the good work!
-Kalamari ;)-
12/23/2010 c5 NintEnzo
Sweet! You update ALOT faster than me. And you got Taz's character on the money! =D I think I have a custom dragon that Taz will ride but I'm not exactly done with it yet and I haven't come up with a catchy name. I was thinking either Skittles, Fluffy, Blade, or (this is gonna sound cheesy) Enzo/Enzanight. I'll review again if I think of something else. For now, adieu!
Sweet! You update ALOT faster than me. And you got Taz's character on the money! =D I think I have a custom dragon that Taz will ride but I'm not exactly done with it yet and I haven't come up with a catchy name. I was thinking either Skittles, Fluffy, Blade, or (this is gonna sound cheesy) Enzo/Enzanight. I'll review again if I think of something else. For now, adieu!
12/23/2010 c5 NintEnzo
Sweet! You update ALOT faster than me. And you got Taz's character on the money! =D I think I have a custom dragon that Taz will ride but I'm not exactly done with it yet and I haven't come up with a catchy name. I was thinking either Skittles, Fluffy, Blade, or (this is gonna sound cheesy) Enzo/Enzanight. I'll review again if I think of something else. For now, adieu!
Sweet! You update ALOT faster than me. And you got Taz's character on the money! =D I think I have a custom dragon that Taz will ride but I'm not exactly done with it yet and I haven't come up with a catchy name. I was thinking either Skittles, Fluffy, Blade, or (this is gonna sound cheesy) Enzo/Enzanight. I'll review again if I think of something else. For now, adieu!
12/23/2010 c5 galeforcewinds12
Nice story! I like where you are going with it! if its not too late, i would like to submit an OC!
Aspen
Blue eyes
medium length brown hair
15.5 years old
a bit on the tall side
She is very outgoing but knows when to get to work. She is also smart but doesn't show it and doesn't know a lot about dragons. Also she gets along with others but doesn't trust them right away.
hope that counts! i can't wait for the next chapter.
Nice story! I like where you are going with it! if its not too late, i would like to submit an OC!
Aspen
Blue eyes
medium length brown hair
15.5 years old
a bit on the tall side
She is very outgoing but knows when to get to work. She is also smart but doesn't show it and doesn't know a lot about dragons. Also she gets along with others but doesn't trust them right away.
hope that counts! i can't wait for the next chapter.
12/23/2010 c4 bomrocks23
Yes! Just made it!
Name: Flare
Gender: Girl
Personality: Smart and outgoing.
Appearance: Average
Talent: Can ride any dragon perfectly with out any thing but can sometimes get to carried away and anger the dragon.
Dragon: Does it have to be an oc dragon or real because i made one up.
Name: Borehorn
Appearance: Red and bulky with horns and thin at the tail. And has square like wings that are medium length
Power: Flies down and scoops up mud and sprays at enemies.
Personality: Can be Stubborn at some times and likes to charge at people like a rhino. Also it can be clumsy.
Yes! Just made it!
Name: Flare
Gender: Girl
Personality: Smart and outgoing.
Appearance: Average
Talent: Can ride any dragon perfectly with out any thing but can sometimes get to carried away and anger the dragon.
Dragon: Does it have to be an oc dragon or real because i made one up.
Name: Borehorn
Appearance: Red and bulky with horns and thin at the tail. And has square like wings that are medium length
Power: Flies down and scoops up mud and sprays at enemies.
Personality: Can be Stubborn at some times and likes to charge at people like a rhino. Also it can be clumsy.
12/22/2010 c4 NintEnzo
Great I can tell the action's coming! Btw I think I might make an oc for this...
Taz (pronounced 'TAZE')
Gray eyes, somewhat short, curly black hair
Somewhat of a troublemaker, but serious at times, likes nature, pretty good swordsman
He can almost always be found eating SOMETHING
I'm not sure yet about the dragon, should it be canon or can it be original? I'm very flexible with him, so change what you want. Keep writing!
Great I can tell the action's coming! Btw I think I might make an oc for this...
Taz (pronounced 'TAZE')
Gray eyes, somewhat short, curly black hair
Somewhat of a troublemaker, but serious at times, likes nature, pretty good swordsman
He can almost always be found eating SOMETHING
I'm not sure yet about the dragon, should it be canon or can it be original? I'm very flexible with him, so change what you want. Keep writing!
12/22/2010 c4 leyla77
im really loving your story so far its really good =) ive also thought up an oc
Maggie
bi eyed- one green eye and one blue eye
avaerage hieght wieght
short pixie cut brown hair
quirky sense of humour
a bit clumbsy
loyal and brave
shy at first to strangers but excitable and eccentric once friends
i thought maybe her dragon could be a deadly nadder and name wise i was thinking lupa im happy if you wnat to change any thing cant wait for the next up date =)
im really loving your story so far its really good =) ive also thought up an oc
Maggie
bi eyed- one green eye and one blue eye
avaerage hieght wieght
short pixie cut brown hair
quirky sense of humour
a bit clumbsy
loyal and brave
shy at first to strangers but excitable and eccentric once friends
i thought maybe her dragon could be a deadly nadder and name wise i was thinking lupa im happy if you wnat to change any thing cant wait for the next up date =)