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12/15/2016 c3 75Cynder2013
I like how you can create a full story in just three chapters. Maybe it's because it's a fanfiction and we already know everything (likely) or maybe it's because you're an awesome writer (just as if not more likely). Either way, this is good.
Happy Holidays!

-Cynder2013
7/11/2016 c3 4Reminiscent Kitkat
Wow, I really enjoyed this. You captured the words and the thoughts of the protagonist pretty darn well. I am impressed and I like how Sera was direct toward Keenan. Ah, the ending seemed to turn dark, but overall...Sera seems to have spoken the harsh truth. Keenan didn't deny it, so there's reality in her words. Well written overall! I loved it. :)
7/20/2015 c3 7M.C.Denalde
Oh my gosh! I seriously can't believe you updated! I'm so impressed that you were able to write that in such a short time too! Although I'm sad such a good story had to end I'm glad you finished it! If you ever write another wicked lovely story I will be sure to read it!
7/19/2015 c2 M.C.Denalde
If you happen to update this I would be a very happy person! This is really good!
5/23/2013 c2 Kim
I would literally give my left arm for you to write more in this story. Your writing is breathtakingly beautiful and so easy to get into. I love the story you have started to create. Absolutely wonderful. Ahem now please forgive the fact that I am 3 years late to the party.
2/23/2012 c2 13anaklusmos1
Interesting story. Please update soon. A chapter in Kennan's POV would be cool. You have a few general grammar problems in your chapters, but otherwise your writing is fine. Maybe try to spice things up with a few other characters? Irial and Beira perhaps? I'm not sure how much Irial concerned himself with Keenan's progress during The Game, but his mere prescence would be enough to aggravate Keenan.
2/3/2012 c2 2Dreamhare
Oh, wow, I always love it when I stumble on KeenanxOC stories! This one also has a brilliant start, and I like the fact she doesn't know she has the Sight. Or I'm gonna think she doesn't know she has it, and it's not really a mental problem. xDD Anyway, very wonderful start, and I do hope you can update someday soon. And a chapter from Keenan's POV would be awesome, because we don't get to see inside his head too often. Happy writing~ 8D
3/16/2011 c2 6Thought Thinker
You should definitly continue this story. And don't worry cause I'm a patient reader since I read a lot of fablehaven. Please keep going!
3/4/2011 c2 Eleanor
this was really good, and I definitely think you should continue this story! :)

it's really interesting to try to see what Keenan was like with girls who weren't "Sighted."

hope to see more!
12/22/2010 c1 21bionsena
this was really good. Keenan was portrayed really well.

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