for Every Second Counts5/13/2014 c1 guest
Wow! I'm so glad that I found this, but so sorry that it just ends with so many compelling questions.
Wow! I'm so glad that I found this, but so sorry that it just ends with so many compelling questions.
11/16/2013 c1 Winchester-or-Whitlock
:0 you cant leave it there! that's just mean :p. really interesting and cant wait to read more x
:0 you cant leave it there! that's just mean :p. really interesting and cant wait to read more x
3/25/2013 c1 BlueSkyAtNight
I'm loving where this story is going and I am very interested in what will. Happen next. But it's only got one chapter, I think you should continue
I'm loving where this story is going and I am very interested in what will. Happen next. But it's only got one chapter, I think you should continue
10/6/2012 c1 aussiec
There's so much potential here, and i really enjoyed reading it. A Ryan POV would much appreciated.
There's so much potential here, and i really enjoyed reading it. A Ryan POV would much appreciated.
6/25/2012 c1 tyler
this story begs to be continued its very interesting
this story begs to be continued its very interesting
12/11/2011 c1 nevermind
I love this story, it's really intrigued me! I'd love to read more of it - are you planning on continuing it? It's certainly good enough! Please update, I'm honestly dying to know what happens. And I'm sure I'm not the only one... Either way, great job so far.
I love this story, it's really intrigued me! I'd love to read more of it - are you planning on continuing it? It's certainly good enough! Please update, I'm honestly dying to know what happens. And I'm sure I'm not the only one... Either way, great job so far.
2/3/2011 c1 
10matthewsbj
I always like the Lindsey and Ryan relationship. I thought it was a shame they didn't continue her character. Although, it seemed like they fought or were taking time/space more then they were together, but he did seem happier when they were together.
Look forward to future installments.
10matthewsbjI always like the Lindsey and Ryan relationship. I thought it was a shame they didn't continue her character. Although, it seemed like they fought or were taking time/space more then they were together, but he did seem happier when they were together.
Look forward to future installments.
12/2/2010 c1 fleurdelivre
I think you have a lot of possibilities for exploration with Lindsay, who had a significant but brief tenure on the show. Maybe one thing to address is why Lindsay chose to go to Berkley for law school if she has bad memories of California and went to school in the East and Midwest for her previous degrees?
Also, I am very intrigued by what condition/ illness has the mighty Ryan Atwood hobbling around with a cane.
Please keep going with this!
I think you have a lot of possibilities for exploration with Lindsay, who had a significant but brief tenure on the show. Maybe one thing to address is why Lindsay chose to go to Berkley for law school if she has bad memories of California and went to school in the East and Midwest for her previous degrees?
Also, I am very intrigued by what condition/ illness has the mighty Ryan Atwood hobbling around with a cane.
Please keep going with this!
11/21/2010 c1 Anonymous
I LOVE this start! I love older Ryan/Cohen interaction. Does Sophie exist in this universe? Some sick Ryan/Sophie would be really cute.
Can't wait for more!
I LOVE this start! I love older Ryan/Cohen interaction. Does Sophie exist in this universe? Some sick Ryan/Sophie would be really cute.
Can't wait for more!
11/15/2010 c1 Michal
This was great! I always loved Ryan/Lindsay too. Can't wait for more :)
This was great! I always loved Ryan/Lindsay too. Can't wait for more :)
11/15/2010 c1 Meeah
Great start! I can't wait to read more.
Great start! I can't wait to read more.
11/14/2010 c1 grahad8
Well done! Really enjoyed this (long awaited) first chapter.
Well written. I guess we knew all along Lindsay would not have found it easy to walk away from Ryan, and you wrote this beautifully. Really cannot imagine Ryan that sick, and with a cane-very sad. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Well done! Really enjoyed this (long awaited) first chapter.
Well written. I guess we knew all along Lindsay would not have found it easy to walk away from Ryan, and you wrote this beautifully. Really cannot imagine Ryan that sick, and with a cane-very sad. Looking forward to the next chapter.
11/14/2010 c1 13Kerschi-Puky
Well, this is a really interesting start. I for my part liked Lindsay a lot, because IMO she was more reliable and mature than all others. So, let me sooooon know how it goes on!
13Kerschi-PukyWell, this is a really interesting start. I for my part liked Lindsay a lot, because IMO she was more reliable and mature than all others. So, let me sooooon know how it goes on!