for Love Isn't Everything Right?4/5/2011 c7 
1Dobe-14
where was my dedication bithc...i have dedicated my newest chaoter to you . yeaahhhh...i want the next CHAPTER DEDICATED TO ME!
please and thank you...love yooouuu
ChiChi xx
1Dobe-14where was my dedication bithc...i have dedicated my newest chaoter to you . yeaahhhh...i want the next CHAPTER DEDICATED TO ME!
please and thank you...love yooouuu
ChiChi xx
2/16/2011 c7 1ElliotKaichan
Ri-chan! I love this story, keep on writing, I ate a cookie and a tray of chips for this I hope all you fans are greatfull! Wow, I mean wow honestly I'm speechless for once!
1ElliotKaichanRi-chan! I love this story, keep on writing, I ate a cookie and a tray of chips for this I hope all you fans are greatfull! Wow, I mean wow honestly I'm speechless for once!
2/15/2011 c7 deletedsaccoiutn
LOVE IT RII-CHAN!
And thanks for the dedication ^^
You'll let me read bits of chapter 8 before you post it won't you? :3
Is the redness Kyuubi?
xx
LOVE IT RII-CHAN!
And thanks for the dedication ^^
You'll let me read bits of chapter 8 before you post it won't you? :3
Is the redness Kyuubi?
xx
2/15/2011 c7 5TheNightmareBeforeDawn
aww thanx! Love you too! haha and Naruto? what happened to him! hope he's okay... stupid bodygaurd... they treat Naruto so badly...
heh sasuke has bodyguards and his name is 'Master Sasuke'. hehe he sounds so royal. hope Sasuke is alright too!
5TheNightmareBeforeDawnaww thanx! Love you too! haha and Naruto? what happened to him! hope he's okay... stupid bodygaurd... they treat Naruto so badly...
heh sasuke has bodyguards and his name is 'Master Sasuke'. hehe he sounds so royal. hope Sasuke is alright too!
2/7/2011 c6 1ElliotKaichan
You wanted me to give you a review so here it is. :) I'm loving the story, but can't you see everyone is dying to know what happens next. If you put the next chapter up, I'll eat a whole bar of chocolate. YES! that is how much I want the next chapter. Your a brill writer, never stopping, NOW HURRY UP AND PUT UP THE NEXT CHAPTER!
:)
1ElliotKaichanYou wanted me to give you a review so here it is. :) I'm loving the story, but can't you see everyone is dying to know what happens next. If you put the next chapter up, I'll eat a whole bar of chocolate. YES! that is how much I want the next chapter. Your a brill writer, never stopping, NOW HURRY UP AND PUT UP THE NEXT CHAPTER!
:)
1/19/2011 c6 1rokudaime09
omg did she kill sasuke. fucking sakura for blackmailing sasuke. and an insane bitch, god! anuwqys i'm hving difficulty following cause of some grammatical errors but it was a good story, i just hope sasuke's nuch stronger cause, hes strong.
1rokudaime09omg did she kill sasuke. fucking sakura for blackmailing sasuke. and an insane bitch, god! anuwqys i'm hving difficulty following cause of some grammatical errors but it was a good story, i just hope sasuke's nuch stronger cause, hes strong.
1/19/2011 c6 5TheNightmareBeforeDawn
*shocks* even though i hate sakura i don't always want her to DIE! geez, let's almost hope she's going to live... actually just maybe... yeah, just maybe... haha and if that attacker is ChiChi then she's a phsycho bitch. if not, then fine. hehe but just in this story, no offence to your friend so... hmm... and i definitely love the PE part... not my fave subject but... i definitely like it here... hehe
thanx for finally putting up the chapter though! haha even though i knew it was going to be late... haha and thanx for the dedication never had that done for me before!
5TheNightmareBeforeDawn*shocks* even though i hate sakura i don't always want her to DIE! geez, let's almost hope she's going to live... actually just maybe... yeah, just maybe... haha and if that attacker is ChiChi then she's a phsycho bitch. if not, then fine. hehe but just in this story, no offence to your friend so... hmm... and i definitely love the PE part... not my fave subject but... i definitely like it here... hehe
thanx for finally putting up the chapter though! haha even though i knew it was going to be late... haha and thanx for the dedication never had that done for me before!
1/18/2011 c6 deletedsaccoiutn
OMG! Update as soon as you can, I'm actually really excited about what's going to happen...if you don't update soon...then I'll pester you at school! MUHAHAHAHAHA! Love this/you :}
OMG! Update as soon as you can, I'm actually really excited about what's going to happen...if you don't update soon...then I'll pester you at school! MUHAHAHAHAHA! Love this/you :}
1/18/2011 c6 1Dobe-14
OH MY...I DO MAKE A GOOD ChiChi dont i! and of course sasuke would feel comfortable around me...who wouldnt be? *looks around and sees everyones ran off* oh... IM NOT THAT BAD YOU COCKS!
and you cant threaten me :| who was the person you said you would call first if you get into a fight?...*waits and puts hands to ear* YEAH THAS RIGHT ME! and i know where you live to! O.o if i ask Shannon and Bushy *btw we need to stop teasing them! who am i kidding I LOVE IT!* And OMG im listening to birthday sex, AGAIN, ITS ALL YOUR FAULT, IF YOU DIDNT LISTEN TO IT WHEN YOU CAME ROUND MINE I WOULD STILL BE DEBATING WHAT SONG TO DO...Grrrr...XD you know this is the longest review i have ever done...YOU BETTER LIKE IT BITCH!
Love you Dobe x
1Dobe-14OH MY...I DO MAKE A GOOD ChiChi dont i! and of course sasuke would feel comfortable around me...who wouldnt be? *looks around and sees everyones ran off* oh... IM NOT THAT BAD YOU COCKS!
and you cant threaten me :| who was the person you said you would call first if you get into a fight?...*waits and puts hands to ear* YEAH THAS RIGHT ME! and i know where you live to! O.o if i ask Shannon and Bushy *btw we need to stop teasing them! who am i kidding I LOVE IT!* And OMG im listening to birthday sex, AGAIN, ITS ALL YOUR FAULT, IF YOU DIDNT LISTEN TO IT WHEN YOU CAME ROUND MINE I WOULD STILL BE DEBATING WHAT SONG TO DO...Grrrr...XD you know this is the longest review i have ever done...YOU BETTER LIKE IT BITCH!
Love you Dobe x
1/7/2011 c2 TheNightmareBeforeDawn
haha naru needs to grow some balls. though it's understanderble that he's afraid...
haha naru needs to grow some balls. though it's understanderble that he's afraid...
1/7/2011 c1 TheNightmareBeforeDawn
haha it's good but you need to edit it a bit. you've got some spelling and grammar errors and a piece of advice, whenever someone new speaks, make a new paragraph. otherwise, it gets hard to read and tell when they're speaking and who's speaking. haha other than that i like it.
haha it's good but you need to edit it a bit. you've got some spelling and grammar errors and a piece of advice, whenever someone new speaks, make a new paragraph. otherwise, it gets hard to read and tell when they're speaking and who's speaking. haha other than that i like it.
1/2/2011 c5 Someone
I really liked it! But I think that maybe you should be more clear on whose perspective the story is being told. Other than that, its a great story!
I really liked it! But I think that maybe you should be more clear on whose perspective the story is being told. Other than that, its a great story!