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5TheNerdiBarbieDoll
I thought you said there was gonna be kissing in this chapter D: it was still hella good (; heheh, i really like seeing the 'sweet' side of Gale with Prim. But also the arguments with him and Madge are still Halrious
5TheNerdiBarbieDollI thought you said there was gonna be kissing in this chapter D: it was still hella good (; heheh, i really like seeing the 'sweet' side of Gale with Prim. But also the arguments with him and Madge are still Halrious
6/12/2011 c10 TheNerdiBarbieDoll
Sorry for reveiwing so fucking late xD anyways... HOLY SHIT this was so funny so funny! i know... i tell you that in all my reviews but you are HALARIOUS! i cant wait to see what ahppens with the mysterious girl... and yay Rory!♥ that boy sure has a potty mouth. i love it!
-Hannah
Sorry for reveiwing so fucking late xD anyways... HOLY SHIT this was so funny so funny! i know... i tell you that in all my reviews but you are HALARIOUS! i cant wait to see what ahppens with the mysterious girl... and yay Rory!♥ that boy sure has a potty mouth. i love it!
-Hannah
5/23/2011 c12 47Jac Danvers
I am absolutely LOVING this story. Holy crap. This is really fantastic. I love the new spins you put on Gale, Madge, even Katniss and Peeta with each chapter. You've done such a great job with character development, and shifting perspectives. Hope to see more soon! Cheers!
47Jac DanversI am absolutely LOVING this story. Holy crap. This is really fantastic. I love the new spins you put on Gale, Madge, even Katniss and Peeta with each chapter. You've done such a great job with character development, and shifting perspectives. Hope to see more soon! Cheers!
5/18/2011 c3 tinplan
I want gale and madge but i dont see any yet.
Anyway, this is totally awesome and hilarious.
I want gale and madge but i dont see any yet.
Anyway, this is totally awesome and hilarious.
5/8/2011 c12 rosesforyoux3
Loved the chapter, specially with all this info on the guys. In the next chapter you should do it with mostly Madge, maybe even get a Madge and Gale scene in there? lol, that would be cool :D Anyway, amazing chapter :D
Loved the chapter, specially with all this info on the guys. In the next chapter you should do it with mostly Madge, maybe even get a Madge and Gale scene in there? lol, that would be cool :D Anyway, amazing chapter :D
5/7/2011 c3 bostickrocks123
well i was just laughing my ass off to tell you the truth, it was hilarious... lol sorry i'm not logined, but i liked this chapter, even though there is absolutely NO Gale and Madge, lol, anyways, great chapter :)
well i was just laughing my ass off to tell you the truth, it was hilarious... lol sorry i'm not logined, but i liked this chapter, even though there is absolutely NO Gale and Madge, lol, anyways, great chapter :)
5/7/2011 c12 4Miss Scarlett 05
Is it bad that I'm still waiting on Miff to make another move on Peeta and Katniss? That would be awesome.
And I'm not sure there was enough bare-chested Peeta in this chapter.
But Gale was dark and Gale. He was a bit of a creeper staring at Madge like that, but I can't blame him.
4Miss Scarlett 05Is it bad that I'm still waiting on Miff to make another move on Peeta and Katniss? That would be awesome.
And I'm not sure there was enough bare-chested Peeta in this chapter.
But Gale was dark and Gale. He was a bit of a creeper staring at Madge like that, but I can't blame him.
5/6/2011 c12 Owlsk8r
YAY for Gales point of view! Haha. He is such an accidental creeper isn't he? I think the having a crush on Madge thing is perfect. Totally would happen. Eagerly awaiting your next update! :)
YAY for Gales point of view! Haha. He is such an accidental creeper isn't he? I think the having a crush on Madge thing is perfect. Totally would happen. Eagerly awaiting your next update! :)
5/6/2011 c12 11Solaryllis
I think there's a reason "LOL" became a ubiquitous internet term and it's because of lines like this one: "hot chocolate probably, with marshmallows, to soothe the pain of his womanly cycle". I cackled. Out loud. Hence the term. Also, laughed at this one: "It sounds like a herd of fucking pigs have taken a wrong turn and ended up down his nasal cavity."
There's probably something wrong with me for loving this jerky version of Gale so much, but so be it. Anyway, Madge can totally handle him.
I liked his honesty that he thinks she's attractive, and some of the descriptions in that paragraph when he's being a creepy window spy really stood out, like the vividly disturbing memory of what her skin smelled like as it burned and the comparison to wild goose flesh. Wow, really good stuff there, writing-wise, and the goose flesh thing was an especially good because it's something Gale would have as a ready metaphor.
Is Rory crushing on Madge a cliche? There's so little Gale/Madge fic... I've never seen it before, and it makes sense with how he's run away.
Awwww... Roaring Lion! :) I'm glad to see the nickname living on. (I'm assuming they know about lions from books or as mutts in the Hunger Games... There are monkeys...) Anyway, in addition to loving Jerky Gale, I love Jerky Big Brother Gale - helping himself to Rory's snares, critiquing the technique, and forcing Rory into their long overdue discussion. BTW, I'm happy Rory is back. He's adding an interesting layer to the Madge-related drama.
The credits idea is awesome, and I like that there's a bounty on the main peeps. So cute how young and hopeful Rory still is about buying up land (future real estate tycoon?) after the war! I like that Gale's proud on behalf of their dad, but doesn't actually express that. I need to hug both of them.
Happy ILAC-ing! ;)
11SolaryllisI think there's a reason "LOL" became a ubiquitous internet term and it's because of lines like this one: "hot chocolate probably, with marshmallows, to soothe the pain of his womanly cycle". I cackled. Out loud. Hence the term. Also, laughed at this one: "It sounds like a herd of fucking pigs have taken a wrong turn and ended up down his nasal cavity."
There's probably something wrong with me for loving this jerky version of Gale so much, but so be it. Anyway, Madge can totally handle him.
I liked his honesty that he thinks she's attractive, and some of the descriptions in that paragraph when he's being a creepy window spy really stood out, like the vividly disturbing memory of what her skin smelled like as it burned and the comparison to wild goose flesh. Wow, really good stuff there, writing-wise, and the goose flesh thing was an especially good because it's something Gale would have as a ready metaphor.
Is Rory crushing on Madge a cliche? There's so little Gale/Madge fic... I've never seen it before, and it makes sense with how he's run away.
Awwww... Roaring Lion! :) I'm glad to see the nickname living on. (I'm assuming they know about lions from books or as mutts in the Hunger Games... There are monkeys...) Anyway, in addition to loving Jerky Gale, I love Jerky Big Brother Gale - helping himself to Rory's snares, critiquing the technique, and forcing Rory into their long overdue discussion. BTW, I'm happy Rory is back. He's adding an interesting layer to the Madge-related drama.
The credits idea is awesome, and I like that there's a bounty on the main peeps. So cute how young and hopeful Rory still is about buying up land (future real estate tycoon?) after the war! I like that Gale's proud on behalf of their dad, but doesn't actually express that. I need to hug both of them.
Happy ILAC-ing! ;)
5/6/2011 c12 Ashes2Dust18
This chapter made me laugh, in a good way tho let me assure you lol Gale`s sarcasm is great, and honestly, i think it would do him some good 2 get laid, he`s way 2 pissed at the world for his own good lol xo
This chapter made me laugh, in a good way tho let me assure you lol Gale`s sarcasm is great, and honestly, i think it would do him some good 2 get laid, he`s way 2 pissed at the world for his own good lol xo
5/6/2011 c12 36mutemockingjay
I was so happy to see the Gale POV because you write the best (and funniest) Gale I've ever read.
I do say it needs more shirtless Peeta, but I am also of the opinion that everything in life needs more shirtless Peeta. ;)
36mutemockingjayI was so happy to see the Gale POV because you write the best (and funniest) Gale I've ever read.
I do say it needs more shirtless Peeta, but I am also of the opinion that everything in life needs more shirtless Peeta. ;)
5/6/2011 c12 3TheMockingjay111
lol my sister snores like i imagined rory to with the pigs and stuff and i feel Gale's pain. i literally laughed out loud and when my sister asked y i was laughing i just pointed to the screen and then to her because i was still laughing but then my parents got really fucking mad at me for showing my little sister the word fuck! god dammit is it really that bad a word? i've heard her say it before but shes all goody two shoes for my parents. i'm fucked there aren't i?
3TheMockingjay111lol my sister snores like i imagined rory to with the pigs and stuff and i feel Gale's pain. i literally laughed out loud and when my sister asked y i was laughing i just pointed to the screen and then to her because i was still laughing but then my parents got really fucking mad at me for showing my little sister the word fuck! god dammit is it really that bad a word? i've heard her say it before but shes all goody two shoes for my parents. i'm fucked there aren't i?
5/6/2011 c12 4EStrunk
Fantastic. Nothing as fun as some early morning rabbit with Gale and Rory. Glad to see they were at least talking to each other and some of their sentences weren't even swearing. The peeping Gale scene was funny - I wonder if Madge's little friend is going to rat him out. His opening the window was so immature - even he noticed that it was. I loved the line about Peeta "soothing the pain of his womanly cycle", right before he notices Peeta's hickey. The whole credits thing was ingenious. Makes total sense - and may be worth nothing.
Thanks for updating. Enjoy your studying!
4EStrunkFantastic. Nothing as fun as some early morning rabbit with Gale and Rory. Glad to see they were at least talking to each other and some of their sentences weren't even swearing. The peeping Gale scene was funny - I wonder if Madge's little friend is going to rat him out. His opening the window was so immature - even he noticed that it was. I loved the line about Peeta "soothing the pain of his womanly cycle", right before he notices Peeta's hickey. The whole credits thing was ingenious. Makes total sense - and may be worth nothing.
Thanks for updating. Enjoy your studying!