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1/4/2018 c1 Borello
damnit. this story sounds very interesting. why you don't write the story?
7/26/2013 c1 Ranmaleopard
this is god damn awesome i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
2/3/2013 c1 Sweet Kagamine K
On the PlayStation 3 internet so I can't log on (takes too long). It gives me some ideas but... meh... I'll keep this challenge in mind.
3/24/2011 c1 Tokero6294
i believe that this fight shouldn't be hidden from the public eye. WE MUST SEE THIS FIGHT!
12/11/2010 c1 2WhiteKnightofHyrule
just a thought why not try something from megaman i think it might fit Naruto better
11/22/2010 c1 Umbra8191
great chapter i can't wait for the next update.
11/21/2010 c1 4master of cheese graters
It's an interesting idea, I must admit. However, it seems eerily similar to another story in the crossover section called "Metroid Legacies" Just saying.
11/20/2010 c1 1otakuburts
this seams like a good cross over. This should take place after the 2nd part of the exame, and during traning with Juria he finds his moms work shop, but thats my suggestion
11/19/2010 c1 2Grimm Fife
you should definitly do this story it sounds like a great story
11/19/2010 c1 1stc-dragon
not bad for a start can't wait to see how it turns out
11/18/2010 c1 1Danfrogger
wow this story sounds very intresting.

although i don't know alot about the Metroid it sound awsome.

you should make the Metroid summon contract is sounds intresting what type of boss wound it be

what about THE SUPER PERVERT is he gona train naruto?

is there gona be minoer or major bashing on people?

is it gona be a bloodline related?
11/18/2010 c1 DragonOfChallenges
now that is a good preview, cant wait for the actual story, i think it should be the training period before the third exam, and you should end a chapter just how you did at the bottom especialy the

'this said Naruto fires the shot, his arm snapping back from the recoil, and watches as Neji barely manages to dodge it.

This is gonna be fun.'

that would awsom, as for how he finds it, how about when jiraiya throws him off the cliff? that would be a good place to have the workshop, start this soon! ttfn

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