
10/1/2017 c20 Netchka
Great chapter and story. Alessandra is a very good character. Looking forward to finding out what happens next.
Great chapter and story. Alessandra is a very good character. Looking forward to finding out what happens next.
6/20/2014 c20
18ncistivafanforever
More please. I love your stories. And please continue your tiva highschool story. I love it. :)

More please. I love your stories. And please continue your tiva highschool story. I love it. :)
7/20/2013 c20 like a lone wolf
In a chapter it would be an awesome idea for you to get Alessandra to set up a meet in Mtac to where Nate could talk to his brother from overseas
In a chapter it would be an awesome idea for you to get Alessandra to set up a meet in Mtac to where Nate could talk to his brother from overseas
3/2/2013 c20 Guest
update! i love this story ahhhh !
update! i love this story ahhhh !
2/8/2013 c20
1StarofQueens
I really like your story, keep up the good work! ;) Just wanted to let you know that Laila Tov is not good morning in Hebrew, but good night. Boker tov is good morning

I really like your story, keep up the good work! ;) Just wanted to let you know that Laila Tov is not good morning in Hebrew, but good night. Boker tov is good morning
2/6/2013 c20 Ncis lover
Great so far please update and also add some Gibbs tony father son moments please
Great so far please update and also add some Gibbs tony father son moments please
2/5/2013 c7 Ncis lover
You are a great fan fiction writer hard to find them keep it up!
You are a great fan fiction writer hard to find them keep it up!
2/5/2013 c20
14Kikilia14
Cute chapter- I liked how Ziva is helping Alyx break the news of the dating to Tony. Very nice.

Cute chapter- I liked how Ziva is helping Alyx break the news of the dating to Tony. Very nice.
2/2/2013 c19 Kikilia14
Just found this story and so glad I read it... I look forward to reading more. Hope you post soon.
Just found this story and so glad I read it... I look forward to reading more. Hope you post soon.
1/11/2013 c18 Marie
Love it. Can't wait to see what you have planned
Love it. Can't wait to see what you have planned