for Whisperings of the Dead10/23/2019 c2 
3FieryMatter
A masterpiece of epic proportions. Shame I didn't spot this earlier. Well written strangebloke! :)
3FieryMatterA masterpiece of epic proportions. Shame I didn't spot this earlier. Well written strangebloke! :)
12/4/2017 c1 Guest
Gostaria de sugerir a Bianca ou Ethan Nakamura .
Gostaria de sugerir a Bianca ou Ethan Nakamura .
12/4/2017 c4 Guest
Uma ótima fanfic com toda certeza, a idéia de forca na história dos mortos foi muito boa. Ao considerar a data da última atualização devo considerar que você morreu ou desistiu dessa fanfic, uma pena (em ambos os casos ) com toda certeza. Parabéns por ter escrito uma história tão boa.
Uma ótima fanfic com toda certeza, a idéia de forca na história dos mortos foi muito boa. Ao considerar a data da última atualização devo considerar que você morreu ou desistiu dessa fanfic, uma pena (em ambos os casos ) com toda certeza. Parabéns por ter escrito uma história tão boa.
7/14/2013 c4 16The Bonecrusher Hyena
...Buetifull...For all chapters...I Don't what else to call it...
16The Bonecrusher Hyena...Buetifull...For all chapters...I Don't what else to call it...
1/4/2013 c4 baby Cyclopes
I love this! :)
I love how you wrote Silena and Beckendorf.
My favorite was Zoe because there are so few stories about her.
Can't wait for more! :D
I love this! :)
I love how you wrote Silena and Beckendorf.
My favorite was Zoe because there are so few stories about her.
Can't wait for more! :D
12/14/2010 c4 75JDKloosterman
Few typos that I'll list later, but the talk itself is interesting. You get a feel for the person's character, his responsibility and caution. The little tidbits on machinery were good inserts, they make it more clear that this is an engineer talking here.
Typos: "Then I could torch the flamethrower torch it" Should be: "Then I could let the flamethrower torch it."
"You have two attractive that do..." Should be: "You have two attractive people that do..."
"My he be remembered." Should be "May he be remembered."
75JDKloostermanFew typos that I'll list later, but the talk itself is interesting. You get a feel for the person's character, his responsibility and caution. The little tidbits on machinery were good inserts, they make it more clear that this is an engineer talking here.
Typos: "Then I could torch the flamethrower torch it" Should be: "Then I could let the flamethrower torch it."
"You have two attractive that do..." Should be: "You have two attractive people that do..."
"My he be remembered." Should be "May he be remembered."
12/12/2010 c4 DaughterofHecate1234
This story is good but confusing, particually Zoe's story.
I didn't really like how you have to guess at some of the character's stories, but the concept is very good.
This story is good but confusing, particually Zoe's story.
I didn't really like how you have to guess at some of the character's stories, but the concept is very good.
12/11/2010 c3 2Evil Genius II
Are you going to do Ancient Greek heroes and Riordanian Greek heroes, or just Riordanian heroes?
2Evil Genius IIAre you going to do Ancient Greek heroes and Riordanian Greek heroes, or just Riordanian heroes?
12/4/2010 c3 10IConcurVehemently
I really like the concept of this story. Last chapter, I liked the unorthodox way you pictured Silena as a lot tougher than she's usually seen. Zoe's chapter was also really insightful.
Personally, I'd love to hear from Beckendorf or Luke. Either of those would be reallyyyy good.
Keep going!
Vehe
10IConcurVehementlyI really like the concept of this story. Last chapter, I liked the unorthodox way you pictured Silena as a lot tougher than she's usually seen. Zoe's chapter was also really insightful.
Personally, I'd love to hear from Beckendorf or Luke. Either of those would be reallyyyy good.
Keep going!
Vehe
12/4/2010 c3 75JDKloosterman
Hm. The chapter setup is a little confusing, as it has one memorial on top of another. Perhaps merely have the second one quote the first, instead of separating them?
Outside of that, fun discursion on heroics. Could have been more tightly constructed around it, there were a few rabbit-trails in the talk, but still interesting stuff on how not all heroes are honorable.
75JDKloostermanHm. The chapter setup is a little confusing, as it has one memorial on top of another. Perhaps merely have the second one quote the first, instead of separating them?
Outside of that, fun discursion on heroics. Could have been more tightly constructed around it, there were a few rabbit-trails in the talk, but still interesting stuff on how not all heroes are honorable.
11/26/2010 c2 JDKloosterman
"Annie Carver," eh?
Interesting voice to the character, definitely rather cynical, and a useful take on the Aphrodite magic being rather cheap. If she'd had more boyfriends the downside might have been more believeable, but hey, constraints of plot.
By the way, it probably wasn't necessary to add at the end that you're a heterosexual male. Guys write stories about girls all the time, just as girls write about guys.
"Annie Carver," eh?
Interesting voice to the character, definitely rather cynical, and a useful take on the Aphrodite magic being rather cheap. If she'd had more boyfriends the downside might have been more believeable, but hey, constraints of plot.
By the way, it probably wasn't necessary to add at the end that you're a heterosexual male. Guys write stories about girls all the time, just as girls write about guys.
11/22/2010 c1 JDKloosterman
If I had to guess, I'd say the main reason no one has reviewed yet is because the story hasn't gone anywhere yet. This is just an introduction. A good one, mind you, and rather important-I liked the "those that walk among the living cannot bear to hear the whispering of the dead"-but at the moment this is only a promise of greater things to come.
If I had to guess, I'd say the main reason no one has reviewed yet is because the story hasn't gone anywhere yet. This is just an introduction. A good one, mind you, and rather important-I liked the "those that walk among the living cannot bear to hear the whispering of the dead"-but at the moment this is only a promise of greater things to come.