for Unforgettable12/14/2010 c1 Lilly57
A good story line and I like the way this was written. The woman with no name! Yet a lady who caught Mick's eye - they have in common the music and the singing.
Write more please - you did it well!
A good story line and I like the way this was written. The woman with no name! Yet a lady who caught Mick's eye - they have in common the music and the singing.
Write more please - you did it well!
11/29/2010 c1 
2CelticWomanJunkie
Delightful twist! I only wish it had been longer and fleshed out, but you did a very good job with what you had.
2CelticWomanJunkieDelightful twist! I only wish it had been longer and fleshed out, but you did a very good job with what you had.
11/24/2010 c1 46moonjat54
This was an interesting piece. I liked it a lot. Our Mick being the aggressor, a different side to him that would have been cool to see.
46moonjat54This was an interesting piece. I liked it a lot. Our Mick being the aggressor, a different side to him that would have been cool to see.
11/23/2010 c1 9Chalicewell
A nice picture postcard. Makes you wonder how Mick would have been if he wasn't so full of angst all the time.
9ChalicewellA nice picture postcard. Makes you wonder how Mick would have been if he wasn't so full of angst all the time.
11/21/2010 c1 11Vampire Reader
Nice twist. Coraline being in a Hawaain band. She should have been wearing a hula skirt, to match the party decor. To think of Mick turning her. I wonder if he would have warned her first. Thanks for the story.
11Vampire ReaderNice twist. Coraline being in a Hawaain band. She should have been wearing a hula skirt, to match the party decor. To think of Mick turning her. I wonder if he would have warned her first. Thanks for the story.