
10/21/2011 c15 MMC
Meep. :P
Notebook. I require. You bring?
Meep. :P
Notebook. I require. You bring?
3/5/2011 c1 Mallory Cullen De Lioncourt
I love it update soon Jess... CAN I PWEASE HAVE PETER FOR A SAY NOW!(char:PLEASE LET HER TALE HIM). SCREAMS FOR JOY
I love it update soon Jess... CAN I PWEASE HAVE PETER FOR A SAY NOW!(char:PLEASE LET HER TALE HIM). SCREAMS FOR JOY
2/3/2011 c6
3Lovevampires28
Right some more and I want ppl to read my stories! Anyway really good! :)

Right some more and I want ppl to read my stories! Anyway really good! :)
2/3/2011 c6 katie. music fanatic
Awesome chapter guys! And if you need someone to type up the chapters, please let me know- I can get them typed pretty fast. 3 ya'll!
Awesome chapter guys! And if you need someone to type up the chapters, please let me know- I can get them typed pretty fast. 3 ya'll!
1/26/2011 c5 Mallory Cullen delioncourt
Hey guys I love it keep it up
Hey guys I love it keep it up
1/5/2011 c1 katie. music fanatic
I'm so glad you guys decided to post these on here! :) I just wanted to let you guys (everyone out there reading this) know that these three amazing authors are amazing and wonderful writers. I hope everyone loves this story as much as I do.
And Jess, Meg, and Sara- if you need me to help ya'll out in any way, please let me know :). 3 you guys tons!
I'm so glad you guys decided to post these on here! :) I just wanted to let you guys (everyone out there reading this) know that these three amazing authors are amazing and wonderful writers. I hope everyone loves this story as much as I do.
And Jess, Meg, and Sara- if you need me to help ya'll out in any way, please let me know :). 3 you guys tons!
1/3/2011 c5 MMC
People are harsh... lol. Yes, I did review on my own story. No I will not stop. And where's Sara? What's she doin' in all this madness? Isn't the next chapter her's?
People are harsh... lol. Yes, I did review on my own story. No I will not stop. And where's Sara? What's she doin' in all this madness? Isn't the next chapter her's?
12/31/2010 c5 alex
What happened to Alice? What about the third girl? More about the character's personality.
What happened to Alice? What about the third girl? More about the character's personality.
12/30/2010 c5 Guest
:)
:)
12/26/2010 c4 Lizbeth-Liz
^.^ Thank You.
I like this, i like the whole "he couln't be human. Humans arn't as perfect an amazing as he was." That sounds just like Twilight.xp.
^.^ Thank You.
I like this, i like the whole "he couln't be human. Humans arn't as perfect an amazing as he was." That sounds just like Twilight.xp.
12/24/2010 c3 alexandra
Great story, you have great expressions and ideas in you. I am a BIG reader and are very picky. I usually don't like to read stories where the WHOLE idea is yours. ( the twilight idea isn't yours) I usually like home made ideas, but your really good. I don't just say that to every story author on fan-fiction. As long as you update often and keep up the good work you'll keep getting my reviews. I also know a lot of people who LOVE twilight and fan-fiction. i can keep you a good audience for every story you write. MERRY CHRISTMAS
Great story, you have great expressions and ideas in you. I am a BIG reader and are very picky. I usually don't like to read stories where the WHOLE idea is yours. ( the twilight idea isn't yours) I usually like home made ideas, but your really good. I don't just say that to every story author on fan-fiction. As long as you update often and keep up the good work you'll keep getting my reviews. I also know a lot of people who LOVE twilight and fan-fiction. i can keep you a good audience for every story you write. MERRY CHRISTMAS