for The Time Turning Elixir1/21/2012 c27 h2olover
When does he find out she's from the future? When are yo updating this?
When does he find out she's from the future? When are yo updating this?
1/17/2012 c27 FLSongbird722
Oh. My. God. I could not stop reading this story! Please, please, please keep going. I understand the stress of a singing career, but I'm sure that creativity helps you wrIte so beautifully. In the meantime i will be reading all your other SS/HG stories to keep me satisfied. :)
Oh. My. God. I could not stop reading this story! Please, please, please keep going. I understand the stress of a singing career, but I'm sure that creativity helps you wrIte so beautifully. In the meantime i will be reading all your other SS/HG stories to keep me satisfied. :)
1/16/2012 c24 
28Lady Cailan
LOL, love how Hermione tells Snape he's going to be a teacher and love it. He doesn't even know! :D
28Lady CailanLOL, love how Hermione tells Snape he's going to be a teacher and love it. He doesn't even know! :D
1/16/2012 c27 Leslie
I just discovered your fic and I read it all one-shot. I must say that it's really well-written and I'm enjoying reading it immensely! Keep it up! I can't wait for an update :)!
I just discovered your fic and I read it all one-shot. I must say that it's really well-written and I'm enjoying reading it immensely! Keep it up! I can't wait for an update :)!
1/14/2012 c27 HermioneFan28
He smiled gently at her, but then it faded. "We have to be careful."
Hermione nodded. "Of course."
"No, you don't understand. We can't let anyone know about us. Being in the public eyes makes us vulnerable to their scrutiny and attacks. No one can know about us if we decide to pursue this. It's better that way."
"That's not fair, Severus," she argued.
"This is only temporary. Don't worry." The tone in his voice lacked any sort of sign he believed the words he spoke.
"I don't have much to say on the matter, I suppose," she said with a hint of frustration in her voice.
"Well, the decision is up to you," he said somberly.
Hermione pursed her lips. "Let me think about it." She turned to leave the dungeons when she heard Severus whisper her name softly.
"Hermione…"
The sound melted her heart, despite the frustration and worry she felt for the Slytherin. She turned to look at him, standing hopelessly with his mouth slightly opened, wanting to speak but at a loss for words. Hermione sighed. He obviously wasn't ready.
"Goodnight, Severus. Let me know if and when you change your mind."
when he said it will be temporary he meant keeping it secret not that there relationship will be temporary. also what was severus gonna say whenhe called her name that time and then stoppped what he was going to say? Hermione…"
The sound melted her heart, despite the frustration and worry she felt for the Slytherin. She turned to look at him, standing hopelessly with his mouth slightly opened, wanting to speak but at a loss for words. Hermione sighed. He obviously wasn't ready.
what wasnt severus ready to say? and what was this part about? "Goodnight, Severus. Let me know if and when you change your mind."
what does severus need to make him mind up about surely its hermione that needs to make up her mind about wanting a SECRET relationsship (i mean she wasnt the relationship but doesnt want it be in secret) with him! ALSO when will you update this BRILLAINT story with many MORE chapters and a sequalS to it to? please DO SO soon, very SOON!
He smiled gently at her, but then it faded. "We have to be careful."
Hermione nodded. "Of course."
"No, you don't understand. We can't let anyone know about us. Being in the public eyes makes us vulnerable to their scrutiny and attacks. No one can know about us if we decide to pursue this. It's better that way."
"That's not fair, Severus," she argued.
"This is only temporary. Don't worry." The tone in his voice lacked any sort of sign he believed the words he spoke.
"I don't have much to say on the matter, I suppose," she said with a hint of frustration in her voice.
"Well, the decision is up to you," he said somberly.
Hermione pursed her lips. "Let me think about it." She turned to leave the dungeons when she heard Severus whisper her name softly.
"Hermione…"
The sound melted her heart, despite the frustration and worry she felt for the Slytherin. She turned to look at him, standing hopelessly with his mouth slightly opened, wanting to speak but at a loss for words. Hermione sighed. He obviously wasn't ready.
"Goodnight, Severus. Let me know if and when you change your mind."
when he said it will be temporary he meant keeping it secret not that there relationship will be temporary. also what was severus gonna say whenhe called her name that time and then stoppped what he was going to say? Hermione…"
The sound melted her heart, despite the frustration and worry she felt for the Slytherin. She turned to look at him, standing hopelessly with his mouth slightly opened, wanting to speak but at a loss for words. Hermione sighed. He obviously wasn't ready.
what wasnt severus ready to say? and what was this part about? "Goodnight, Severus. Let me know if and when you change your mind."
what does severus need to make him mind up about surely its hermione that needs to make up her mind about wanting a SECRET relationsship (i mean she wasnt the relationship but doesnt want it be in secret) with him! ALSO when will you update this BRILLAINT story with many MORE chapters and a sequalS to it to? please DO SO soon, very SOON!
1/14/2012 c26 HermioneFan28
if severus is summoned wont he have to take hermione with him to the dark lord EVEN THOUGH hermione and severus have broken up?
if severus is summoned wont he have to take hermione with him to the dark lord EVEN THOUGH hermione and severus have broken up?
1/14/2012 c25 HermioneFan28
surely the memory shouldnt have eneded for the young severus because the older snape dies surely it should go on fether since the memory wasnt from the older snape himself but from hermione herself? isnt that how memories work?
surely the memory shouldnt have eneded for the young severus because the older snape dies surely it should go on fether since the memory wasnt from the older snape himself but from hermione herself? isnt that how memories work?
1/14/2012 c24 HermioneFan28
i thought it was 1999 in the present day but now at the biggining of this chapter is says its 1998! what gives?
i thought it was 1999 in the present day but now at the biggining of this chapter is says its 1998! what gives?
1/14/2012 c23 HermioneFan28
"Sir," he began to speak in a hoarse voice, "I don't think I can finish this application."
Belby looked up with surprise. "Why would you say that, Severus?"
He sighed and closed his eyes. "I refuse to succumb to the Ministry's demands. They have no right to suspect any of us of such activity. It keeps them suspicious, and if I allow them to do this one test, it might spiral out of control and they might try to continue to violate our privacy."
The older wizard stared at him with disbelief. "But Severus, you realize you won't have another opportunity to train? These practices are being enforced in all of the hospitals across the continent, and I'm sure even if this war ends soon, it won't be years until the law is repealed."
His jaw clenched, Severus slowly nodded at the older wizard. "Then, I suppose I'll just have to wait…"
After tireless efforts on Belby's part to convince Severus to change his mind, the old man resigned to the fact that the young talented wizard was going to forego furthering his education. Even though he was disappointed, he couldn't help but respect the decision he made.
"We are going to lose a very talent Healer, that's for sure, Mr. Snape," he spoke sadly.
Severus shook his hand, still clenching his jaw to retract the angry frustration and torment that threaten to escape his mouth. "This doesn't mean it's over, Mr. Belby," he said firmly.
He nodded in agreement. "As long as men like you stay diligent, we won't have these flobberworms in office. I will fight your fight with you, starting with a handwritten petition. I'll craft it myself and floo to every corner of this country to get signatures, if I have to." A friendly, smile was put on his face. "If you need any further career advice, let me know. I'll give you my best reference."
Severus thanked him once more, and with great precision, he apparated back to the gates of Hogwarts. How he managed that feat was beyond him. He felt completely defeated and numb. Smaller distractions had gotten wizards splinched in the process.
Even though everything seemed normal around the castle, Severus' life had spun 180 degrees in less than a week. He was facing the wrath of the Dark Lord because of a romantic interest, he had to confront that said woman and convince her to go with him to the next revel (and do all in his power not to get her in harm's way), and now he had to figure out what he was supposed to do with the rest of his life, now that he had no way to get into the medicine program.
OH MY GOD if severus doesnt continou to process then he will never be a potions master etc and hermione's teacher in the future and his future will have chaned more than just him coming back to life! RIGHT?
"Sir," he began to speak in a hoarse voice, "I don't think I can finish this application."
Belby looked up with surprise. "Why would you say that, Severus?"
He sighed and closed his eyes. "I refuse to succumb to the Ministry's demands. They have no right to suspect any of us of such activity. It keeps them suspicious, and if I allow them to do this one test, it might spiral out of control and they might try to continue to violate our privacy."
The older wizard stared at him with disbelief. "But Severus, you realize you won't have another opportunity to train? These practices are being enforced in all of the hospitals across the continent, and I'm sure even if this war ends soon, it won't be years until the law is repealed."
His jaw clenched, Severus slowly nodded at the older wizard. "Then, I suppose I'll just have to wait…"
After tireless efforts on Belby's part to convince Severus to change his mind, the old man resigned to the fact that the young talented wizard was going to forego furthering his education. Even though he was disappointed, he couldn't help but respect the decision he made.
"We are going to lose a very talent Healer, that's for sure, Mr. Snape," he spoke sadly.
Severus shook his hand, still clenching his jaw to retract the angry frustration and torment that threaten to escape his mouth. "This doesn't mean it's over, Mr. Belby," he said firmly.
He nodded in agreement. "As long as men like you stay diligent, we won't have these flobberworms in office. I will fight your fight with you, starting with a handwritten petition. I'll craft it myself and floo to every corner of this country to get signatures, if I have to." A friendly, smile was put on his face. "If you need any further career advice, let me know. I'll give you my best reference."
Severus thanked him once more, and with great precision, he apparated back to the gates of Hogwarts. How he managed that feat was beyond him. He felt completely defeated and numb. Smaller distractions had gotten wizards splinched in the process.
Even though everything seemed normal around the castle, Severus' life had spun 180 degrees in less than a week. He was facing the wrath of the Dark Lord because of a romantic interest, he had to confront that said woman and convince her to go with him to the next revel (and do all in his power not to get her in harm's way), and now he had to figure out what he was supposed to do with the rest of his life, now that he had no way to get into the medicine program.
OH MY GOD if severus doesnt continou to process then he will never be a potions master etc and hermione's teacher in the future and his future will have chaned more than just him coming back to life! RIGHT?
1/14/2012 c21 HermioneFan28
a revel they will make him fuck innocent victims and he will lose his virginity to that! so unfair! he should have lost it to hermione! is hermione a virgin? is severus a virgin?
a revel they will make him fuck innocent victims and he will lose his virginity to that! so unfair! he should have lost it to hermione! is hermione a virgin? is severus a virgin?
1/14/2012 c20 HermioneFan28
how can remus being alive be bad news i thought they liked Remus? also what about Tonks is she STILL dead or is she alive? and how come they remeber remus and Tonks died if history is changing surely only hermione will remeber things as the were before history was chaned? RIGHT? also how can snape grave going missing be BAD news! thats BRILLIANT news! EVIL bitches! oh
i LOVE snape!
how can remus being alive be bad news i thought they liked Remus? also what about Tonks is she STILL dead or is she alive? and how come they remeber remus and Tonks died if history is changing surely only hermione will remeber things as the were before history was chaned? RIGHT? also how can snape grave going missing be BAD news! thats BRILLIANT news! EVIL bitches! oh
i LOVE snape!
1/14/2012 c19 HermioneFan28
oh no he was about to call her mudblood like he did lilly and he lost her anyway (except unlike with lilly he stopped himself from calling her that) and now he has lost hermione too! ? will Hermione ever forgive him for his slip and for joining the death easters? i thought hermione said NOMATTER WHAT HE DID OR SAID she wouldnt abandon him like lilly did! except she has now? will severus ever forgive her for that? will hermione? is this the end to them? also Severus Snape was already gone, in every sense of the word. He was out of the stairwell. He was a Death Eater. And in the future, he was dead.
and is this true now that hermione went back in time is snape gonna be dead in the future? also when in the past it turned from 1977 to 1978 will it have turned the same way in 1998? will it have tuned 1999 or is time at a stand still or moving diffrently?
oh no he was about to call her mudblood like he did lilly and he lost her anyway (except unlike with lilly he stopped himself from calling her that) and now he has lost hermione too! ? will Hermione ever forgive him for his slip and for joining the death easters? i thought hermione said NOMATTER WHAT HE DID OR SAID she wouldnt abandon him like lilly did! except she has now? will severus ever forgive her for that? will hermione? is this the end to them? also Severus Snape was already gone, in every sense of the word. He was out of the stairwell. He was a Death Eater. And in the future, he was dead.
and is this true now that hermione went back in time is snape gonna be dead in the future? also when in the past it turned from 1977 to 1978 will it have turned the same way in 1998? will it have tuned 1999 or is time at a stand still or moving diffrently?
1/14/2012 c16 HermioneFan28
could severus have a cure potion? why are there too cauldron full of potions?
Severus walked past her to the cauldron with shaky steps. He filled a separate small basin full of the power potion and quietly set down the ladle. When he turned to face Hermione, he was clenching his jaw to retain his anger. "And you call yourself a Gryffindor," he said bitterly.
When his eyes met Hermione, he was surprised to see sadness in those eyes that usually held so much passion. She handed him the goblet. "I'm sorry. I just can't bear to see you harm yourself. Now, and in the long run…" She said this like she knew something he didn't…
He filled the goblet with the potion that was in the smaller basin and handed it back to her. "I measured the dose in this smaller bowl here. You have to drink the entire contents or the…effects...won't subside." He couldn't bear to utter the word 'pain' instead of effects.
She glanced inside the up and swirled around the contents. "What should I expect after I take this?" she asked, trying to mask her fear.
could severus have a cure potion? why are there too cauldron full of potions?
Severus walked past her to the cauldron with shaky steps. He filled a separate small basin full of the power potion and quietly set down the ladle. When he turned to face Hermione, he was clenching his jaw to retain his anger. "And you call yourself a Gryffindor," he said bitterly.
When his eyes met Hermione, he was surprised to see sadness in those eyes that usually held so much passion. She handed him the goblet. "I'm sorry. I just can't bear to see you harm yourself. Now, and in the long run…" She said this like she knew something he didn't…
He filled the goblet with the potion that was in the smaller basin and handed it back to her. "I measured the dose in this smaller bowl here. You have to drink the entire contents or the…effects...won't subside." He couldn't bear to utter the word 'pain' instead of effects.
She glanced inside the up and swirled around the contents. "What should I expect after I take this?" she asked, trying to mask her fear.