for The Time Turning Elixir9/13/2018 c2 A
Interesting. Hermione is in character. She wasn't that strong in canon either.
Interesting. Hermione is in character. She wasn't that strong in canon either.
9/11/2018 c1 Guest
Great story. Ignore the stupid flames (e.g. Veelagio).
Great story. Ignore the stupid flames (e.g. Veelagio).
8/25/2018 c40 robituputup
Wow! Amazing fic. Well written and holding interest. There are occasional misspellings or mistakes in sentences (like you wanted to write in one way but changed your mind and finished in another way), but they are few and far between. I can't wait for the next part :D
Thank you for the great reading piece!
Wow! Amazing fic. Well written and holding interest. There are occasional misspellings or mistakes in sentences (like you wanted to write in one way but changed your mind and finished in another way), but they are few and far between. I can't wait for the next part :D
Thank you for the great reading piece!
7/14/2018 c37 VeelaGio
I am reading this chapter and... yeah I'll continue to read the story. But I am wondering why you removed everything that made Hermione her. She is irrationnal she sounds like she doesn't think she is... weak and pathetic. It's very disturbing. You didn't like her? You wanted to destroy a great female by making her a love obsessed-fool? What was your motivation?
I am reading this chapter and... yeah I'll continue to read the story. But I am wondering why you removed everything that made Hermione her. She is irrationnal she sounds like she doesn't think she is... weak and pathetic. It's very disturbing. You didn't like her? You wanted to destroy a great female by making her a love obsessed-fool? What was your motivation?
6/22/2018 c39 cagzclarine
J'attendais la fin de votre histoire pour mettre un commentaire et finalement vous avez décidé de nous de le faire en cliffhanger (très mal ;-) !). Assurément, j'ai aimé votre version et j'ai hâte de découvrir la suite. J'aime aussi votre présentation des répercussions des actions d'Hermione (les personnes sauvées mais aussi celles qui ont été blessées ou tuées) et je trouve intéressant de montrer qu'elle aura à y faire face. A bientôt donc pour la suite des aventures ! Merci.
J'attendais la fin de votre histoire pour mettre un commentaire et finalement vous avez décidé de nous de le faire en cliffhanger (très mal ;-) !). Assurément, j'ai aimé votre version et j'ai hâte de découvrir la suite. J'aime aussi votre présentation des répercussions des actions d'Hermione (les personnes sauvées mais aussi celles qui ont été blessées ou tuées) et je trouve intéressant de montrer qu'elle aura à y faire face. A bientôt donc pour la suite des aventures ! Merci.
6/13/2018 c9 Irene
Amazing! It could use some improvement in word choice and grammar, though.
Amazing! It could use some improvement in word choice and grammar, though.
6/13/2018 c7 Serenity
Great story! So far, the only thing that needs improvement is grammar.
Great story! So far, the only thing that needs improvement is grammar.
65/25/2018 c40 Phoenix Rebel
Wow...that was quite a cliff hanger... Well at least I hope it's a cliff hanger...doh!
Wow...that was quite a cliff hanger... Well at least I hope it's a cliff hanger...doh!
2/21/2018 c1 Jane
Hope you update soon. Good fic!
Hope you update soon. Good fic!
2/21/2018 c1 J
Update, please!
Update, please!
10/18/2017 c1 Guest
Update? It would be polite to say if you have abandoned this story.
Update? It would be polite to say if you have abandoned this story.
9/11/2017 c39 DarthLeia19
Please finish this history you can't let me without knowing what happen with Hermione, is not fair all the adventure to finish like that
Please finish this history you can't let me without knowing what happen with Hermione, is not fair all the adventure to finish like that
9/10/2017 c1 Lee
You've probably abandoned this, but great story anyway.
You've probably abandoned this, but great story anyway.
7/1/2017 c39 Fantomette34
I have devoured all the chapters of your fiction and I loved, it is great !
Hermione's return to the past and her relationship with Severus and the Marauders are perfectly described and highly plausible.
I fell in love with your story and I beg you on your knees to sue it, you can not give up such a jewel ! You are a great writer, congratulations !
Many thanks for sharing :)
I have devoured all the chapters of your fiction and I loved, it is great !
Hermione's return to the past and her relationship with Severus and the Marauders are perfectly described and highly plausible.
I fell in love with your story and I beg you on your knees to sue it, you can not give up such a jewel ! You are a great writer, congratulations !
Many thanks for sharing :)