
11/28/2016 c24 Guest
I'm crying over Remus and Teddy.
I'm crying over Remus and Teddy.
11/28/2016 c23 Guest
Damn. So much is being changed.
Damn. So much is being changed.
11/28/2016 c21 Guest
Noooo.
Noooo.
11/28/2016 c18 Guest
Omg
Omg
11/28/2016 c16 Guest
Wow
Wow
9/25/2016 c39 Thorn
Great fic, thank you so much for the journey!
I just checked the dates, you've been writing this for 6 years, wow! I can't imagine the amount of stubbornness and dedication you did put in, and I hope, still will, as I would very much enjoy reading what happen next.
Your idea of travel time is very interesting, and not one I remember reading yet : the past can be changed, and people in the present are aware of it. It's brilliant!
Is Hermione supposed to have her memories changing too now that she's in the present again? I'm really wondering how her actions did change their relationship during her Hogwart's years, and looking forward for a Snape point of view of those 7 years.
I really enjoyed your younger Snape, different but true to himself, clever and sentimentally clueless at the same time.
I'm more dubious about Hermione, as I don't picture her adult self as someone who will spend so much time crying. She was not like that during her 7th year after all, and was quite under duress at that time.
And I'm chocked at how bold she is. She killed over 200 hundred persons! That so unlike her, to not think about consequences before, specially on this scale. I was relieved Voldemort is still defeated in the new time line. Did she even thought about it?!...
But even so out of character, I have to admit that I really enjoy her interaction with Snape. Together they are great! And you've got so many very original ideas. The early stage of the Felix Felicis, for example, made for an awesome chapter.
Thanks again for putting all these brilliant ideas in word, for our enjoyment :)
Great fic, thank you so much for the journey!
I just checked the dates, you've been writing this for 6 years, wow! I can't imagine the amount of stubbornness and dedication you did put in, and I hope, still will, as I would very much enjoy reading what happen next.
Your idea of travel time is very interesting, and not one I remember reading yet : the past can be changed, and people in the present are aware of it. It's brilliant!
Is Hermione supposed to have her memories changing too now that she's in the present again? I'm really wondering how her actions did change their relationship during her Hogwart's years, and looking forward for a Snape point of view of those 7 years.
I really enjoyed your younger Snape, different but true to himself, clever and sentimentally clueless at the same time.
I'm more dubious about Hermione, as I don't picture her adult self as someone who will spend so much time crying. She was not like that during her 7th year after all, and was quite under duress at that time.
And I'm chocked at how bold she is. She killed over 200 hundred persons! That so unlike her, to not think about consequences before, specially on this scale. I was relieved Voldemort is still defeated in the new time line. Did she even thought about it?!...
But even so out of character, I have to admit that I really enjoy her interaction with Snape. Together they are great! And you've got so many very original ideas. The early stage of the Felix Felicis, for example, made for an awesome chapter.
Thanks again for putting all these brilliant ideas in word, for our enjoyment :)
7/18/2016 c39 Winterinsomia
Interesting chapter. I hope you find time to write more soon. I wonder where Severus is? Hermione seems close to canon. She means well, but her actions speak louder than words. This should have more reviews, indeed. I have read worse than this (with more reviews.) :)
Interesting chapter. I hope you find time to write more soon. I wonder where Severus is? Hermione seems close to canon. She means well, but her actions speak louder than words. This should have more reviews, indeed. I have read worse than this (with more reviews.) :)
7/14/2016 c39 Lara
One of the best chapters. This should have more reviews. I liked Ron in this fic. Like in this fic, Hermione seems so self-righteous in canon. Hope everything falls into place. Good luck with your next chapter.
One of the best chapters. This should have more reviews. I liked Ron in this fic. Like in this fic, Hermione seems so self-righteous in canon. Hope everything falls into place. Good luck with your next chapter.
7/10/2016 c39 J
Update soon? You have two new readers.
Update soon? You have two new readers.
6/16/2016 c39 BlightedRose
I have just found your story and read it over the course of two days. It is really wonderful and has taken me for one hell of an emotional rollercoaster-ride.
I am glad to see that it has been updated recently, and i hope you will update here when you make a sequel to continue the story. If you update us ind a 'new chapter', we will get notice by e-mail, so we know where to continue.
This story is bloody brilliant and I adore it to bits! :D
Keep up your good work, I'll look forwqrd to reading more, whenever you've had the time to write more :D
Virtual cookies and all sorts of nice rewarding things is mentally sent your way!
Best regards,
Michala
I have just found your story and read it over the course of two days. It is really wonderful and has taken me for one hell of an emotional rollercoaster-ride.
I am glad to see that it has been updated recently, and i hope you will update here when you make a sequel to continue the story. If you update us ind a 'new chapter', we will get notice by e-mail, so we know where to continue.
This story is bloody brilliant and I adore it to bits! :D
Keep up your good work, I'll look forwqrd to reading more, whenever you've had the time to write more :D
Virtual cookies and all sorts of nice rewarding things is mentally sent your way!
Best regards,
Michala
6/10/2016 c39 pgoodrichboggs
Oh my goodness this is the best story ever. What's to happen to her and Severus is Dumbledore still alive. Will Hermione get out of Azkaban and will Snape remember Hermione? I read all of this story in one sitting. I'm so excited for the next installment! You have crafted this story with such care I have been sucked in.
Oh my goodness this is the best story ever. What's to happen to her and Severus is Dumbledore still alive. Will Hermione get out of Azkaban and will Snape remember Hermione? I read all of this story in one sitting. I'm so excited for the next installment! You have crafted this story with such care I have been sucked in.
6/9/2016 c39 Auroras Jenkins
There is much damage do to the shift. Hope that she will get a fair trail. Hope that Severus will be able to see her before they put her in Azkaban. Witch they will probably do, just hope that it won't be for life.
There is much damage do to the shift. Hope that she will get a fair trail. Hope that Severus will be able to see her before they put her in Azkaban. Witch they will probably do, just hope that it won't be for life.
5/18/2016 c38 MrsMorgan813
nooooo! i mean, I wanted her to go back to her time but dang it! poor sev!
nooooo! i mean, I wanted her to go back to her time but dang it! poor sev!