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2/17 c1 4Stormysea-breaks
I am very late reviewing but I really think it right to tell you that I think this story is amazing. You have great writing skills and the main characters just sound so authentic.
Bobby catching Dean having sex is the funniest scene ever! It also has pathos when you describe Dean's reaction at the possibility that Bobby might tell his dad. The description of Dean's thought processes as he thinks through the horror of it is superbly done. As we live through Dean's awful sickness through Bobby's watchful eye we learn so much more about the three of them. The boys are there for each other, they protect each other at all cost even if it might take the life of one of them. Bobby is in love. He is the true dad in this tale.
This is one of the best work of fanfiction I have ever read. The moment when John turns up begrudgingly and wrenches his sons away from Bobby is my definition of tragedy.
Thank you so much for having written this very thoughtful work.
5/20/2020 c1 distanceincrowdedrooms
Sam was so in character! Poor Dean. I really want a sequel of this! I wanna see John realize how much stress he's putting on his sons.
8/2/2019 c1 Bdjdvvdhd
Omg I need to sleep but this is too gooood

And I oop-
5/12/2017 c1 Guest
Now then, I'll be honest here, I only started reading this because I was bored and couldn't sleep. I fully expected it to be atrocious. However, this entire story has been most enjoyable to read. I don't know if you are trying to be an author or if you are one already but, if you do decide that being an author is the path for you, then could you please put your name on here so that I may buy any books you may publish.
Thanks once again
1/17/2017 c1 3arwenadreamer
Ouch, that hurt. I liked that story, especially the end! Thank you!
11/24/2016 c1 jublke
This is a great explanation for the falling out between Bobby and John. Poor Dean!
11/23/2016 c1 clare bartlett
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1/6/2016 c1 18yroldgirl
I actually have CVS so seeing it in a story was kinda shocking! Not many people know about it and most think it's just a ploy for attention. Great job at spreading the word. In my case the CVS is not like that, it's a daily struggle with nausea. But anyway, great story! Keep at it jerk ;)
12/27/2014 c1 2aries.girl67
I've been looking for a good fanfiction of the young Winchesters, and this one was marvelous. I was a bit surprised at the length to start with, but it was beautifully written and well-worth the few extra minutes it took to read. Great story!
7/17/2014 c1 Dana
I actually have CVS and I wanted to thank you. It's such a rare condition that this is the first time I've ever seen someone like me in writing. I really appreciate that
6/11/2014 c1 7Art Is The Weapon
Good fic, I liked seeing young Sam and Dean from Bobby's perspective. :)
4/21/2014 c1 A
Poor Dean! God, why is John so stubborn?! Although when he's not it's very ooc. Anyway, you are an awesome person ;)
Your writing is impeccable
3/19/2014 c1 TheSomnambulistX
I'm thoroughly creeped out right now. I'm sick and you basically just described my exact situation through Dean. I've had blood tests and X-rays all come back normal and this has happened twice before. Now I'm going to have to look into cyclic vomiting syndrome.
8/19/2013 c1 43celestial1
Oh, my - I love every word of this!
5/26/2013 c1 Fall Rider
Good story! Really well written! I love fatherly Bobby and he comes across really well in this. And I was cracking up at Bobby in the store with the Jenny girl!
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