1/17/2017 c43 Guest
Terrific story - I like your open ending for Spike - He could ask to be transformed into a male slayer to still have a life with Buffy and to continue to be her equal as a warrior. That would be my Perfect Ending for them.
Terrific story - I like your open ending for Spike - He could ask to be transformed into a male slayer to still have a life with Buffy and to continue to be her equal as a warrior. That would be my Perfect Ending for them.
1/17/2017 c34 Guest
neat way that you changed this from the series -
neat way that you changed this from the series -
1/17/2017 c27 Guest
I think you have done a very good treatment for Riley and his relationship with Buffy - it's a good fit with how their relationship went in the series and with your telling of their time together.
I think you have done a very good treatment for Riley and his relationship with Buffy - it's a good fit with how their relationship went in the series and with your telling of their time together.
1/17/2017 c23 Guest
I like having a Spike-Giles chapter - I've always liked the idea of Spike and Giles not being in such an extreme adversarial relationship.
I like having a Spike-Giles chapter - I've always liked the idea of Spike and Giles not being in such an extreme adversarial relationship.
1/16/2017 c19 Guest
An excellent chapter -
An excellent chapter -
1/16/2017 c12 Guest
It's great reading this story again -
It's great reading this story again -
1/16/2017 c2 FFLjm12B
Harmony always such a good to work with - I'll even go with a Riley that's not the one I disliked so much in the series. Looking forward to reading your story.
Harmony always such a good to work with - I'll even go with a Riley that's not the one I disliked so much in the series. Looking forward to reading your story.
6/7/2015 c43 all forms of fluff
I kinda liked this one. While it deviated from cannon material you were able to bring about an interesting concept. The last few chapters were a bit to much of the 'oh lets all say Spike is a good person' rip that a lot of writers do when trying to make it a Spuffy story. The final fight was kind of scattered but it was a decent payoff. I did enjoy this story. Thank you for writing it.
I kinda liked this one. While it deviated from cannon material you were able to bring about an interesting concept. The last few chapters were a bit to much of the 'oh lets all say Spike is a good person' rip that a lot of writers do when trying to make it a Spuffy story. The final fight was kind of scattered but it was a decent payoff. I did enjoy this story. Thank you for writing it.
2/19/2015 c43 mom8828
As far as Spike taking Ereshkigal's offer, I say he should, only if she could leave him with his strength, stamina and speed, sort of like a male slayer. Then he would still be Buffy's equal, and able to really help her, and not have her always fearing for his safety as she did with Riley. Thanks for a great story!
As far as Spike taking Ereshkigal's offer, I say he should, only if she could leave him with his strength, stamina and speed, sort of like a male slayer. Then he would still be Buffy's equal, and able to really help her, and not have her always fearing for his safety as she did with Riley. Thanks for a great story!
2/2/2014 c43 nrdhrd3
That was an amazing story! I loved every word even the Riley parts n I don't like him! Thank you for writing this!
That was an amazing story! I loved every word even the Riley parts n I don't like him! Thank you for writing this!
10/15/2013 c6 Hercules8
I love that part where Spike is William, I love nice Spike!
I love that part where Spike is William, I love nice Spike!