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99Indigo-Night-Wisp
I'd probably feel worse about how Riley's feeling with all this if I didn't dislike him so much. And Xander's a good guy, although at times he can be somewhat of a git, but right now, Buffy doesn't need to hear about how her boyfriend is having insecurity issues. (The thing is, I get that. She's not in love with him, so she doesn't feel the same need to comfort and reassure that she did with Angel.)
Also, found this very amusing:
'I'm sure you must be cheating – has Spike been teaching you to cheat?'
99Indigo-Night-WispI'd probably feel worse about how Riley's feeling with all this if I didn't dislike him so much. And Xander's a good guy, although at times he can be somewhat of a git, but right now, Buffy doesn't need to hear about how her boyfriend is having insecurity issues. (The thing is, I get that. She's not in love with him, so she doesn't feel the same need to comfort and reassure that she did with Angel.)
Also, found this very amusing:
'I'm sure you must be cheating – has Spike been teaching you to cheat?'
9/7/2011 c21 404WinterSky101
Sigh. Xander, Xander, Riley IS the rebound guy! Spike's the once-in-a-lifetime one!
404WinterSky101Sigh. Xander, Xander, Riley IS the rebound guy! Spike's the once-in-a-lifetime one!
6/24/2011 c20 14Stina Whatever
that's scary. i mean, that the gateway might have had something to do with it. and it wasn't in the show. like, something similair. i like that
14Stina Whateverthat's scary. i mean, that the gateway might have had something to do with it. and it wasn't in the show. like, something similair. i like that
6/24/2011 c20 9SpuffyCookieDough
Another awesome chapter. I like your mythological spin on Glory. Very interesting. Can't wait to read what happens next.
9SpuffyCookieDoughAnother awesome chapter. I like your mythological spin on Glory. Very interesting. Can't wait to read what happens next.
6/24/2011 c20 99Indigo-Night-Wisp
Pookie. Oh Anya. :)
Ishtar? There's been speculation that my real name actually came from hers. Also, I think she ate babies and started Pagan Easter traditions.
Ah! The Gateway is your spin? Very nice, I like it! :D
99Indigo-Night-WispPookie. Oh Anya. :)
Ishtar? There's been speculation that my real name actually came from hers. Also, I think she ate babies and started Pagan Easter traditions.
Ah! The Gateway is your spin? Very nice, I like it! :D
6/24/2011 c20 9Stevonnie-U
To quote a very great man, 'And the fun just keeps on leaving!' For them, not for me, this story is great!
9Stevonnie-UTo quote a very great man, 'And the fun just keeps on leaving!' For them, not for me, this story is great!
6/18/2011 c19 Dreylin
While I love the story over all, one thing that does bug me is the use of single quotes for speech. My eyes are used to double quotes - as that's what's used in virtually every other story I've ever read. Single quotes are usually used for thoughts, or something similar. It makes reading the story a bit more difficult. You do a really good job of separating speech from big paragraphs, so it's not so bad as it could be, but it does slightly detract from the reading experience. That's really the only criticism I can think of. Minor formatting quibble aside, the writing is top-notch, and a joy to read.
While I love the story over all, one thing that does bug me is the use of single quotes for speech. My eyes are used to double quotes - as that's what's used in virtually every other story I've ever read. Single quotes are usually used for thoughts, or something similar. It makes reading the story a bit more difficult. You do a really good job of separating speech from big paragraphs, so it's not so bad as it could be, but it does slightly detract from the reading experience. That's really the only criticism I can think of. Minor formatting quibble aside, the writing is top-notch, and a joy to read.
6/16/2011 c19 9Stevonnie-U
I never liked Riley, even before the whole Jasmine thing. I always wanted to see Spike kick the crap out of him.
9Stevonnie-UI never liked Riley, even before the whole Jasmine thing. I always wanted to see Spike kick the crap out of him.
6/16/2011 c19 1MoonSilverSpite
I have to say you have wrote a fantastic chapter again. Which makes me not mind the wait as much. I'm thinking Riley id going evil or vampire. I can't get the image of him dressing like Billy Idol or brooding (I think that's how you spell it) like Angel. That cracks me up.
Forever you now faithful reader,
Moonsilver
1MoonSilverSpiteI have to say you have wrote a fantastic chapter again. Which makes me not mind the wait as much. I'm thinking Riley id going evil or vampire. I can't get the image of him dressing like Billy Idol or brooding (I think that's how you spell it) like Angel. That cracks me up.
Forever you now faithful reader,
Moonsilver