8/24/2013 c43 Rabbit-moon
I just finished reading all 43 chapters! I couldn't put my iPad down! I was so hooked! Wow! Such a great re-write! I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks! I wish Season 5 had actually worked out like this.
I just finished reading all 43 chapters! I couldn't put my iPad down! I was so hooked! Wow! Such a great re-write! I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks! I wish Season 5 had actually worked out like this.
5/26/2013 c43 6Whovian-CapitolGirl
oH WOW, i LOVE THIS STORY! Only one thing im not happy with though...
IT ENDED! WHY? :( No more Vice versa!
Whovian-CapitolGIrl x :)
oH WOW, i LOVE THIS STORY! Only one thing im not happy with though...
IT ENDED! WHY? :( No more Vice versa!
Whovian-CapitolGIrl x :)
5/15/2013 c43 FFLjm12B
Totally enjoyed your story and your treatment of the characters. This is a very neat alternative to the Glory-Key story. I agree with you about the open ending; let the readers create their own ending for Spike.
Totally enjoyed your story and your treatment of the characters. This is a very neat alternative to the Glory-Key story. I agree with you about the open ending; let the readers create their own ending for Spike.
5/15/2013 c36 FFLjm12B
I really like this softer and open minded and not into the automatic I loath Spike mode. Nice way to end the chapter after so much of the emotional turmoil and torture for Buffy and Spike.
I really like this softer and open minded and not into the automatic I loath Spike mode. Nice way to end the chapter after so much of the emotional turmoil and torture for Buffy and Spike.
5/15/2013 c18 FFLjm12B
Excellent character study of Riley and his seeking out "the why" of his relationship with Buffy. Good treatment for all three characters.
Excellent character study of Riley and his seeking out "the why" of his relationship with Buffy. Good treatment for all three characters.
5/15/2013 c15 FFLjm12B
great chapter - you make me feel sorry for Riley and I'm one of those viewers who disliked him the first time he appeared.
great chapter - you make me feel sorry for Riley and I'm one of those viewers who disliked him the first time he appeared.
5/14/2013 c3 FFLjm12B
Looking forward to reading your story - Like the premise of your episode variation - you got all the characters spot on.
Looking forward to reading your story - Like the premise of your episode variation - you got all the characters spot on.
5/9/2013 c43 14KittenOfDoomage
Fantastic, absolutely adored it and so original! The transition between Buffy's feelings for Spike was spot on. I'm going to go and see if you have any other goodies to read!
Fantastic, absolutely adored it and so original! The transition between Buffy's feelings for Spike was spot on. I'm going to go and see if you have any other goodies to read!
5/9/2013 c37 KittenOfDoomage
This chapter is pure excellence. Freak On A Leash - a nod to Korn perhaps? Love it. And 'That guy is the vamp equivalent of an elevator fart – just keeps hangin' around, however much you waft.' had me laughing out loud! The interaction here showing Xander's feelings are brilliant, he is much more mature here.
This chapter is pure excellence. Freak On A Leash - a nod to Korn perhaps? Love it. And 'That guy is the vamp equivalent of an elevator fart – just keeps hangin' around, however much you waft.' had me laughing out loud! The interaction here showing Xander's feelings are brilliant, he is much more mature here.
5/9/2013 c23 KittenOfDoomage
Fantastic chapter, I loved the interaction between Giles and Spike. I'm not much of a football fan myself, but it's always fun to challenge Man Utd fans, who are for the most part "glory hunters" lol, wonder if Spike'll be upset about Fergie retiring?
Fantastic chapter, I loved the interaction between Giles and Spike. I'm not much of a football fan myself, but it's always fun to challenge Man Utd fans, who are for the most part "glory hunters" lol, wonder if Spike'll be upset about Fergie retiring?
4/28/2013 c18 27Jhiz
hmm, I like this way better than the trip to the bronze. It is more intimate.
I always felt a bit bad for Riley right up until this point but then the pity just went "poof". It is no different with your rendition.
hmm, I like this way better than the trip to the bronze. It is more intimate.
I always felt a bit bad for Riley right up until this point but then the pity just went "poof". It is no different with your rendition.
4/28/2013 c15 Jhiz
oh wow... at least she didn't scream Spike's name... that would have just been a real stake in Riley's heart.
oh wow... at least she didn't scream Spike's name... that would have just been a real stake in Riley's heart.