3/31/2013 c25 32Baphrosia
I know I keep saying it, but I really appreciate how you've treated Riley here, and his dynamic with Buffy. It's very well done. I'm enjoying this story quite a bit.
I know I keep saying it, but I really appreciate how you've treated Riley here, and his dynamic with Buffy. It's very well done. I'm enjoying this story quite a bit.
3/31/2013 c15 Baphrosia
Hee, love the switch up, giving Spike's fantasies and dreams to Buffy. I'm wondering if he's still having his own versions though. :)
Hee, love the switch up, giving Spike's fantasies and dreams to Buffy. I'm wondering if he's still having his own versions though. :)
3/31/2013 c7 Baphrosia
I'm glad I found this story complete here (I've been waiting for it to be finished on EF). I'm enjoying it very much so far, and I *especially* enjoy the lack of character-bashing, even Riley. Thanks for keeping him the decent (if steadily more confused) guy he was on the show.
I'm glad I found this story complete here (I've been waiting for it to be finished on EF). I'm enjoying it very much so far, and I *especially* enjoy the lack of character-bashing, even Riley. Thanks for keeping him the decent (if steadily more confused) guy he was on the show.
3/28/2013 c1 10spiritedghost
Okay this is fun and the best line goes to, "'Fine.' Buffy grabbed the grocery bag from his hand and held it out to the side, pinning him against the crypt with her other hand. 'Talk, or the booze gets it.'" I think you get my point that was funny. So I will be shuffling along now and reading the rest. Later...
Okay this is fun and the best line goes to, "'Fine.' Buffy grabbed the grocery bag from his hand and held it out to the side, pinning him against the crypt with her other hand. 'Talk, or the booze gets it.'" I think you get my point that was funny. So I will be shuffling along now and reading the rest. Later...
3/1/2013 c4 Theblueeyedvampirearchive
This dialogue here is fantastic, especially Xander's witty comments and Spike's accent. Despite Riley's existence - haha - I really enjoy this story! Good work!
This dialogue here is fantastic, especially Xander's witty comments and Spike's accent. Despite Riley's existence - haha - I really enjoy this story! Good work!
2/22/2013 c43 5raineynight
Hello, I really loved your story! I read it all in one sitting, and am now very tired. XD I really enjoyed some of the different characterizations that you used, like with Xander being more understanding than he usually is, in fanfiction OR canon. He still wasn't my favorite, but that could be because he's one of the things standing between Buffy and Spike and their eternal happiness together! XD I really liked the part where Anya gets upset because of Xander's attitude towards "reformed" demons, because it really makes a lot of sense. In conclusion, I just REALLY loved this story, it was a very enjoyable read, and by far one of the best Spuffy stories I've read so far. :D
Hello, I really loved your story! I read it all in one sitting, and am now very tired. XD I really enjoyed some of the different characterizations that you used, like with Xander being more understanding than he usually is, in fanfiction OR canon. He still wasn't my favorite, but that could be because he's one of the things standing between Buffy and Spike and their eternal happiness together! XD I really liked the part where Anya gets upset because of Xander's attitude towards "reformed" demons, because it really makes a lot of sense. In conclusion, I just REALLY loved this story, it was a very enjoyable read, and by far one of the best Spuffy stories I've read so far. :D
2/17/2013 c25 Guest
She needs to buck-up (get more confidence) and break-up with Riley
She needs to buck-up (get more confidence) and break-up with Riley
2/14/2013 c4 Guest
holy sh*t
holy sh*t
2/8/2013 c43 TrudyJames33
Thank you for such a great story! I have been following for quite a while now, but somehow the email about this last chapter got lost in my mess of an inbox. Your story was truly a delight to read. It is, by far, my favorite of the Buffy stories that I've read and would have made a preferable story line for the show, in my opinion. You're a fantastic writer and do such a great job of writing the characters in a way that is very authentic to their personalities on the show. Great job!
Thank you for such a great story! I have been following for quite a while now, but somehow the email about this last chapter got lost in my mess of an inbox. Your story was truly a delight to read. It is, by far, my favorite of the Buffy stories that I've read and would have made a preferable story line for the show, in my opinion. You're a fantastic writer and do such a great job of writing the characters in a way that is very authentic to their personalities on the show. Great job!
2/7/2013 c23 ammuna
so glad i found this story here. the previous chapter was the last one posted on EF and I was really looking forward to how it went on. very funny encounter between giles and S.
so glad i found this story here. the previous chapter was the last one posted on EF and I was really looking forward to how it went on. very funny encounter between giles and S.
1/26/2013 c43 5whiters
I like the way you ended it. Sometimes it is better to leave it to the reader. I enjoyed reading this story. Thanks for writing!
I like the way you ended it. Sometimes it is better to leave it to the reader. I enjoyed reading this story. Thanks for writing!
1/23/2013 c43 cosmiclove
Cool, I love stories which are complete :)
Cool, I love stories which are complete :)
1/21/2013 c43 BlueRuby
Amazing story! Your writing is excellent, the plot was original n most importantly you kept the characters true to themselves while giving them the oppurtiny for them to develop. Overall wonderful n ill be looking out for more of your work
Amazing story! Your writing is excellent, the plot was original n most importantly you kept the characters true to themselves while giving them the oppurtiny for them to develop. Overall wonderful n ill be looking out for more of your work