for Her Messed Up Life11/15/2012 c3 faith123
I love this story I read it ages ago and keep coming back and rereading because it is so awesome please update soon
I love this story I read it ages ago and keep coming back and rereading because it is so awesome please update soon
9/27/2011 c1 
57iamwallflowerxx
Yo gusta:D
I like it (if you don't speak spanish:D). It's interesting and cute. I'm intregued!
57iamwallflowerxxYo gusta:D
I like it (if you don't speak spanish:D). It's interesting and cute. I'm intregued!
7/10/2011 c3 18I'mDifferent-GetOverIt
Hi! I was bored, and I decided to take a look at your stories. I LOVE this. All that needs to be fixed is a few punctuation and capitalization errors. And that can be fixed with a beta, such as my self *nudge, nudge* UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
Ma'salaama (I think I spelled that right...maybe. Anyway, Go in peace in Arabic)
18I'mDifferent-GetOverItHi! I was bored, and I decided to take a look at your stories. I LOVE this. All that needs to be fixed is a few punctuation and capitalization errors. And that can be fixed with a beta, such as my self *nudge, nudge* UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
Ma'salaama (I think I spelled that right...maybe. Anyway, Go in peace in Arabic)
2/23/2011 c1 Serethielle
:-) Once I saw you had a story up, I couldn't resist. I hope I won't offend you or anything, but when it comes to reviewing stories, I do it in a critical way, so please don't take offense. :)
Firstly, my favorite moments:
-Scorpius who said how sad even though he didn't look sad. Dunno why, but made me laugh xD
-Draco randomly and out-of-the-blues offering to adopt Rose o.O
Just want to say few things now:
1.Be careful to always capitalize. I saw quite a couples of times that you were missing capitals.
2.I'd add a bit more description, and Hermione (and Ron) should be much more concerned. (panicked)
3.Well, the fact that Draco randomly adopts her and her never finding her home ever again is kind of worrying. I mean, don't you think Draco would know (by the red hair) that she is a Weasley kid? And even so, Hermione wouldn't just abandon her kid, never trying to find her ever again. She'd put things up in the newspaper and Draco would surely read it and give back her kid. Just my little impression of that part though, still a great start.
Good luck! :)
:-) Once I saw you had a story up, I couldn't resist. I hope I won't offend you or anything, but when it comes to reviewing stories, I do it in a critical way, so please don't take offense. :)
Firstly, my favorite moments:
-Scorpius who said how sad even though he didn't look sad. Dunno why, but made me laugh xD
-Draco randomly and out-of-the-blues offering to adopt Rose o.O
Just want to say few things now:
1.Be careful to always capitalize. I saw quite a couples of times that you were missing capitals.
2.I'd add a bit more description, and Hermione (and Ron) should be much more concerned. (panicked)
3.Well, the fact that Draco randomly adopts her and her never finding her home ever again is kind of worrying. I mean, don't you think Draco would know (by the red hair) that she is a Weasley kid? And even so, Hermione wouldn't just abandon her kid, never trying to find her ever again. She'd put things up in the newspaper and Draco would surely read it and give back her kid. Just my little impression of that part though, still a great start.
Good luck! :)
1/20/2011 c3 9HollyWrites
OH HELL NO.
I'M MARRYING DRACO.
Or, at least, let me kidnap him and rape him a bit XD
good chapter, update soon, Jessi x
9HollyWritesOH HELL NO.
I'M MARRYING DRACO.
Or, at least, let me kidnap him and rape him a bit XD
good chapter, update soon, Jessi x
12/29/2010 c3 3the-writing-vampire
I love how you go and show us how Rose intereacts with other students here. And Scorpius randomly stops by the Gryffindor table.
3the-writing-vampireI love how you go and show us how Rose intereacts with other students here. And Scorpius randomly stops by the Gryffindor table.
12/23/2010 c3 14P.o.T.t.Y.F.a.N.x
WOW!
That was an awesome as chapter :)
I was excited to see my name at the bottom haha!
But seriously - I loved the whole Albus and James team up stalker thing!
Keep doing what you're doing :) Cause its good!
Xx
14P.o.T.t.Y.F.a.N.xWOW!
That was an awesome as chapter :)
I was excited to see my name at the bottom haha!
But seriously - I loved the whole Albus and James team up stalker thing!
Keep doing what you're doing :) Cause its good!
Xx
12/23/2010 c3 DontHaveAnAccount
This story rocks! Please continue, I want to know what happens next :) Great Story!
This story rocks! Please continue, I want to know what happens next :) Great Story!