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3/26/2011 c1 dijsg8uihdsf
OhJee-Uhm.I like the concept for this story.I REALLY do.Its agreat concept,and ideas,and stuff.But the writeing,to puit it plainly,is suckey.Youre lack of puncutaion bothers me.And the lack of capatilasaition.And you spelt so many words wrong *yesIknowyousaidaboutitintheA/N* But,some words,I couldent figure out what they were.Seriusly.But,ya' know.Other then that it was pretty good. ;u;

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