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12/21/2010 c1 1pegada
ahhh...fuuunnnn...

you *may* want to think about your chapter titles though. This one doesn't really seem relevant. Just saying. Anyhoo, nice beginning, and just enough of a cliffhanger to make it interesting, but not too much of a one to make me want to strangle you. Which would be pretty easy, remember.
12/12/2010 c2 ffanfiction
interesting
12/11/2010 c2 Guest
Look, until the end of the chapter it was interesting but it's not believable that "fake" auror uses a mind control curse on Harry and almost succeed when he had far less problems with fake Moody and Voldemort's imperio curse, the strongest mind control curse.

You better rethink this to make it believable.
12/11/2010 c2 12Alec McDowell
Oooh this story has a promising start, I'm looking forward to more
12/6/2010 c1 Kali Rose
Dun dun DUNN! (yes, dramatic music was necessary)

Alrighty then... oddly dressed wizards who've come to collect Mr. Potter and/or destroy his wand... I think they need to hold a "blending into the muggle world" seminar at the Ministry...

Can't wait for more!

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