3/28/2014 c1 3The MTB Skiing Mister Smith
loved it ... but there was 1 or 2 mistakes not big probably its just dam Auto-correct like at one point its "he moved his lips to her eat" i think you meant ear . but no hatting i loved this chapter. I just want to help because I do the same thing.
loved it ... but there was 1 or 2 mistakes not big probably its just dam Auto-correct like at one point its "he moved his lips to her eat" i think you meant ear . but no hatting i loved this chapter. I just want to help because I do the same thing.
3/4/2014 c1 Samanthap93
Gahd yiiiiisssss! I am so into lover Gajeel it's not even funny! This was hot, you wrote them very well :D
Gahd yiiiiisssss! I am so into lover Gajeel it's not even funny! This was hot, you wrote them very well :D
11/18/2013 c4 Guest
i look in the anime metallicana was gajeel foster father dragon if that makes sense i know it sounds girly but metallicana is a male along with igneel but great story line love it
i look in the anime metallicana was gajeel foster father dragon if that makes sense i know it sounds girly but metallicana is a male along with igneel but great story line love it
11/17/2013 c1 Guest
omg i love it gajeel and levy belong to eachother forever
omg i love it gajeel and levy belong to eachother forever
5/19/2013 c5 Xx. GaLe .xX
wow,.. as in omg
that was a great story
i liked the turns of the story and
it hooked me deeper to read more
all i can say is job well done
love it
please continue writing especially about gajeel and levy :)
wow,.. as in omg
that was a great story
i liked the turns of the story and
it hooked me deeper to read more
all i can say is job well done
love it
please continue writing especially about gajeel and levy :)
3/26/2013 c1 Guest
LOL, OMG beautiful i'm a hardcore fan of the romance gale,nalu,grju, just so beautiful #1
LOL, OMG beautiful i'm a hardcore fan of the romance gale,nalu,grju, just so beautiful #1
1/10/2013 c4 Guest
luv dat lemon.
luv dat lemon.
1/10/2013 c3 Guest
where is the lemoness juice with sugar.
where is the lemoness juice with sugar.
1/7/2013 c1 none of ur biss
i think it should be more slutty.
it is to soft and sweet it should be hardcore and rough.
its levy were talkin bout she small and gajeel is big honestly i think that gajeel would kill her with his big cock
i think it should be more slutty.
it is to soft and sweet it should be hardcore and rough.
its levy were talkin bout she small and gajeel is big honestly i think that gajeel would kill her with his big cock