6/12/2023 c10 GuestsFans
No, we did not liked this chapter. You ruined the magic of imprint. He fucks around are you kidding? If his future mate is too little it doesnt mean he can screw around! How is this fare to Ness? Why is the girl wairs her prince in a tower while he is jumping sleazy frogs? Are you nuts? Anal death to him for that kind of caring about his future.

8/2/2018 c1 3King Alpha Wolf
Wow so everybody just became assholes and said fuck leah. Yeah jake is a bad alpha

11/14/2017 c13 Debbie Hicks
15.
Chapter 14.!:Vulcans
Nessie'spov
then in to La Push, Washington attacked as all of mazillions dran k b lood then Volturi found me killing more then

10/31/2017 c12 brankel1
Awesome.

10/23/2017 c11 brankel1
Fantastic.

1/16/2017 c9 brankel1
Love it.

5/11/2011 c8 dawnmac
Good chapter, I am a bit confused about Bella's attitude towards Jacob, they were best friends and she is the one who screwed with his head and now she is being rotten to him, it doesn't make sense. I would think she would defend Jacob to Edward. Jacob has never been anything but above board with their daughter and it pisses me off. I think you are handling the Nessie and puberty storyline in a realistic way. Please get them together soon.

1/19/2011 c7 scareDcat
Poor Nessie ~ I'd hate a mind reading Dad!