for Breaking The Line12/4/2013 c1 
70Scruff the Rat
"The Devil must've been his pupil." That line...actually this whole ficlet...I am speechless!
70Scruff the Rat"The Devil must've been his pupil." That line...actually this whole ficlet...I am speechless!
11/26/2010 c1 11iwas13andiwantthisgone
Wow.
Just wow.
Amazing story, and I absolutely adore the style of it. It really flows well.
Reading this was the perfect end to my day :]
11iwas13andiwantthisgoneWow.
Just wow.
Amazing story, and I absolutely adore the style of it. It really flows well.
Reading this was the perfect end to my day :]
11/26/2010 c1 8SG1Bauer
Extremely well written, you did a great job of expressing Pepper's emotions. Great job, loved it!
8SG1BauerExtremely well written, you did a great job of expressing Pepper's emotions. Great job, loved it!
11/26/2010 c1 9RomanceDoneWrite
Yum! That is so super sexy and really well written. Update soon, this is captivating and amazing!
9RomanceDoneWriteYum! That is so super sexy and really well written. Update soon, this is captivating and amazing!
11/25/2010 c1 anarchist-dog-owner
I'd love to see Tony's perspective on this scene. Pepper's characterization is perfect.
Really good.
I'd love to see Tony's perspective on this scene. Pepper's characterization is perfect.
Really good.