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12/4/2013 c1 70Scruff the Rat
"The Devil must've been his pupil." That line...actually this whole ficlet...I am speechless!
11/26/2010 c1 11iwas13andiwantthisgone
Wow.

Just wow.

Amazing story, and I absolutely adore the style of it. It really flows well.

Reading this was the perfect end to my day :]
11/26/2010 c1 8SG1Bauer
Extremely well written, you did a great job of expressing Pepper's emotions. Great job, loved it!
11/26/2010 c1 9RomanceDoneWrite
Yum! That is so super sexy and really well written. Update soon, this is captivating and amazing!
11/26/2010 c1 1Piinco
I love it! It's perfect! You did an amazing work, I love! Kudos! *_*
11/25/2010 c1 anarchist-dog-owner
I'd love to see Tony's perspective on this scene. Pepper's characterization is perfect.

Really good.
11/25/2010 c1 spockside
Nice look into Pepper's head. I like the insight into her warring emotions.

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