for Have mercy8/15/2013 c1 Guest
Yes. Please, continue this. No, it doesn't matter that this was published almost three years ago. Nope.
Yes. Please, continue this. No, it doesn't matter that this was published almost three years ago. Nope.
12/26/2012 c1 Catastrophic Monsoon
Pleeeease write another chapter! I'm so curious about the reaper. And who was the woman?! I can almost picture this as the 2nd season of American horror story xD that's a good thing hahaha
Pleeeease write another chapter! I'm so curious about the reaper. And who was the woman?! I can almost picture this as the 2nd season of American horror story xD that's a good thing hahaha
8/7/2012 c1 
2PearlesantlRose
I am a bit sad that you never added any more chapters. I think this is a very interesting plot line. I would have loved to see where it went. I am going put it in my follow list in hopes that maybe one day you will continue.
2PearlesantlRoseI am a bit sad that you never added any more chapters. I think this is a very interesting plot line. I would have loved to see where it went. I am going put it in my follow list in hopes that maybe one day you will continue.
1/2/2012 c1 9MARYLOVER
Interesting plot... will you ever come back here and continue? I'm feeding my alert list with it though...
9MARYLOVERInteresting plot... will you ever come back here and continue? I'm feeding my alert list with it though...
8/2/2011 c1 ElricLover96
This is fabulous I can't beleave this is ur second languadge the writing is amazing! Pleez write more I'd like to know what happens next!
This is fabulous I can't beleave this is ur second languadge the writing is amazing! Pleez write more I'd like to know what happens next!
7/15/2011 c1 BlahBlahBlackBeast
Ohh! I think this would be really good if you continued! I would love to find out what is happening!
Ohh! I think this would be really good if you continued! I would love to find out what is happening!
11/27/2010 c1 HeyThereOwO
Sakura likes where this is going.
I perish interesting this early, I look softy emotions the next chapter.
Sakura likes where this is going.
I perish interesting this early, I look softy emotions the next chapter.
11/27/2010 c1 Pidgeon-san
Great start! I don't think you have anything to feel insecure about. I didn't see any errors and I'm usually really picky about these things. I'm really interested in this story so can't wait for your next chapter!
Great start! I don't think you have anything to feel insecure about. I didn't see any errors and I'm usually really picky about these things. I'm really interested in this story so can't wait for your next chapter!