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12/3/2010 c3 romcat
You're setting this up beautifully. First time I've liked Will even a little in a FF.

It's got just the right tone, of irony, melancholy and humour... well done!

tip of the hat to Ashley for her behind the scenes work! :)

Cudo's Author, well done!

11/28/2010 c2 romcat

well you're not rushing this which is great. Not a huge fan of Will but...

Nice idea turn on Mothers day! I'll keep reading...

11/28/2010 c2 1Gleeksupport
Good! Continue!
11/28/2010 c2 3Ashley218
oooh suspense
please update soon!
11/27/2010 c1 Ashley218
I love the concept of this story. By the way, when writing dialogue, you're supposed to skip a line whenever a new speaker speaks. Just to help out.

Anyway, I can't wait to see where you go with this.

Please update soon
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