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12/18/2018 c1 Guest
Awful. That was all one long, incomprehensible sentence. You really need to proofread your writing. Make sure it makes sense and make it more than one run-on sentence.
5/23/2013 c2 annebeth hermione tyler
Awesom
1/3/2013 c2 Night-Waker
Remember, quotation marks are your friends.
12/16/2012 c1 Eagle
You hurt the English Language! Go sit in the naughty corner!
PS:This made no sense due to having hardly any punctuation. Please, please delete this for the good of humanity.
11/23/2011 c1 1thepieslayer
I got lost at "the" Please improve.
7/8/2011 c1 Kara4398
Ummmm. You might wanna try a different language and a little less beer cuz thes wad orrabel.

English and alcohol really ain't your thing...
3/13/2011 c1 1StarWarsGeekie
this was so funny! i was laughing the whole time!
12/2/2010 c1 7Cartoonatic55
TROLL IN THE DUNGEON! TROLL IN THE DUNGEON! TROLL IN THE DUNGEON!

Seriously man, were you trying to make no sense whatsoever with this?
12/2/2010 c1 16Third Kind
...What did I just read? I'm sorry, but I completely lost it by the 1st sentence. XD

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