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8/6/2012 c1 cryptex
what is this beauty?!
7/6/2012 c1 1Aevr
i loved it!
everything, the emotions, the fear of jeff
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2/12/2011 c1 16LoremIpsum
I really loved that you tackled the subject of Jeff's past. The offhand remark Jeff made in that episode kind of stayed with me as well. If he really was abused it would explain a lot about his character.

The story is very well written. My only criticism is that I think Jeff would be a little less obvious that something was bothering him. Maybe he would reveal it in a different way. Anyway, great job.
12/12/2010 c1 20MegalegU
I love the way you wrote Abed - exactly as his character on the show. That being said - I really did love the story . Jeff being vulnerable just never seems to happen. And what you wrote about it seems like it could be almost true. He never talks about his past. You're a good writer! :)
12/5/2010 c1 27Miss Lavender Sky
This was beautifully written. You're fantastic.
11/28/2010 c1 13StarzOfDraco
I know this is a Annie/Jeff fic, but I must say that you captured Abed spectacularly well! I loved his dialogue and that little conspiratorial wink.

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