9/16/2012 c3 milburnmindy
Omg please tell ur contuing with the story or u let someone else keep writing either way please. PM me and let me know love the story in just 3 chapters!
Omg please tell ur contuing with the story or u let someone else keep writing either way please. PM me and let me know love the story in just 3 chapters!
5/2/2012 c3 12an uglier end
i'm a sucker for happy stuff too cant wait for the rest of the story... really excited :)
i'm a sucker for happy stuff too cant wait for the rest of the story... really excited :)
12/9/2010 c2 13Simaril
Another awesome chapter.
I really liked reading in first person perspective.
Does she know they are vampires? It would be a shame to miss reading how she worked it out and her reactions.
Another awesome chapter.
I really liked reading in first person perspective.
Does she know they are vampires? It would be a shame to miss reading how she worked it out and her reactions.
11/28/2010 c1 1hmtcutie
OMG LOVE IT! Why did you start out with Carlisle? Does Edward still fall in love with her?
OMG LOVE IT! Why did you start out with Carlisle? Does Edward still fall in love with her?
11/28/2010 c1 pseudonimo
A very exciting first chapter.
I like the character development and having a younger Bella at the start of the story is uncommon so kudos to you for going against the norm.
I’m looking forward to reading more.
A very exciting first chapter.
I like the character development and having a younger Bella at the start of the story is uncommon so kudos to you for going against the norm.
I’m looking forward to reading more.