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7/21/2022 c15 Anthony1415
story was very well done and crafted and i think that you put sauske out of his misery to be with his precious clan all and all very good story 7-10 rating
4/14/2022 c1 Zeke
cool story so far.
8/17/2020 c2 4iacopo.passerini
Divertente e romantico questo appuntamento!
8/21/2018 c15 234-5vw8n7y48mc5wt09uq09c8unm
That was beautiful! Loved the ending, it was really sweet!
7/8/2018 c15 4Monster King
Great story I really liked it good job writing the story.
4/4/2018 c15 QueenDeadPool
That was very sweet.
4/4/2018 c5 1TheWateringWizard
Not gonna lie, I didn’t like this chapter: the public announcement of their marriage, Jiraiya’s announcement (seriously why ?) and then all three going to bed and falling asleep simultaneously ? That’s very corny, cliche... whatever you want to call it.

We know that Naruto is very glad that Hinata spoke up during his fight against Kiba so don’t put a reminder in every chapter.

I also really dislike what you did with the Rasengan. Bending it into other shapes like hearts and rings ?! The only thing that Rasengan would’ve done to Hinata’s finger is to tear it off. And using earth and fire to create metal ? Stupid...

Sorry if I sound harsh but I prefer to be honest
4/4/2018 c4 TheWateringWizard
Ah... why do they need to tell the whole village ? It’s not their problem ?
4/4/2018 c2 TheWateringWizard
Ohhhhh ! It was so cute !
4/4/2018 c1 TheWateringWizard
Wow that was a great chapter !
4/2/2018 c15 Crimson Hawk Wolf
This was a great story even if some things were confusing for the most part just to be explained at a later time lol.

I wonder what other stories I have left to read now. Besides a few I’m waiting for more chapters to before starting lol
11/25/2017 c15 Guest
This story was a bit choppy at first but the way you brought it to a close in the chuunin exams was awesome and the timeskip was perfect timing (pun not intended)
8/11/2017 c15 1E.Richtofen
I'm a bit surprised with the ending, seeing how fast things moved in the first several chapters, I would have expected them to be married at 16, since they were engaged around 12-13. It's just something I noticed, it didn't affect the story in any negative sense. The story was actually really damn good, a truly excellent NaruHina fanfic. No chapter, no scene was boring. Every scene had a point to either move the story or their relationship along. The fights were shortened, which is nice, because I wasn't expecting this story to be action based much. You closed off everything pretty well, and some areas felt a bit rushed, but all that means is that I enjoyed the story so much that I actually wanted it to be longer and to have more content. So, overall the pacing, plot, character development was all good and the quality of the story as far as writing goes was also excellent.
8/10/2017 c5 E.Richtofen
It's only the fifth chapter and I already feel like it's one of the better NaruHina fanfictions out there. Your writing is very easy to follow, and the way you separate scenes just make the read that much more enjoyable. There are hardly any semantic or syntax errors in most of your chapters. I also think you're being a bit hard on yourself in the author's notes, Naruto is a bit OOC, but that doesn't mean he is a bad character because of it. You tend to favor Hinata on confidence in most of your stories, but you still allow her to retain a majority of her original personality. You managed to make Jiraiya and Hiashi both more respectable as characters, which is great, because Hiashi is underplayed and Jiraiya doesn't really do as much for Naruto aside from the Akatsuki stuff. Also, I would like to reiterate that having Naruto and Hinata basically be proposed to one another at such a young age, makes complete sense, since they are living the life of a shinobi. In regards to this specific chapter, I was very happy to know that Jiraiya decided to take on both Naruto and Hinata as his apprentices. They both had a lot of natural talent with Hinata's weakness being her confidence, so it seems natural that she would be chosen. Anyways, back to binge reading.
8/10/2017 c3 E.Richtofen
You know when you really think about it, getting married or at least having an arranged marriage at a young age (12), makes a lot of sense in the life of a shinobi. So, with that said, I think Naruto's behavior did change drastically, but not for the worse, because it makes complete sense. As for Hiashi, I think the story you gave him, that made him change to loving Hinata was way better than him simply being cold because he is a Hyuuga. Great story so far, can't wait to keep reading, like most of your stories this one also has a good plot.
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