for A Single Call8/10/2017 c2 
1E.Richtofen
Well, that's Naruto's style go 100% on everything, including a relationship. He basically just tied the knot.
1E.RichtofenWell, that's Naruto's style go 100% on everything, including a relationship. He basically just tied the knot.
8/26/2016 c1 41lagseeing1123
What a surprise this is. I was just checking Lets Take It Slow again to add it to a Community but then I find out you continued the three part series into this full story. I'll be checking this out
41lagseeing1123What a surprise this is. I was just checking Lets Take It Slow again to add it to a Community but then I find out you continued the three part series into this full story. I'll be checking this out
3/22/2016 c1 demonicKitsune2
It's not 'Naruto Barrage' the 'Uzumaki Barrage' with each clone saying a syllable of his last name and at the end Naruto announces the full name. But story's still good through
It's not 'Naruto Barrage' the 'Uzumaki Barrage' with each clone saying a syllable of his last name and at the end Naruto announces the full name. But story's still good through
1/19/2016 c14 xNaruHina
I am confused. Naruto could have simply performed a sealess shaf ow clone jutsu and had them substitute him out of Hinatas technique easily yes? That was honestly pretty pathetic for him to give up.
I am confused. Naruto could have simply performed a sealess shaf ow clone jutsu and had them substitute him out of Hinatas technique easily yes? That was honestly pretty pathetic for him to give up.
1/19/2016 c9 xNaruHina
Alright there is a few things I have noticed so far. One is an inconsistency. Naruto said earlier that only three people accepted him, their being Jiraiya, Hinata, and the Third. However, Hiashi had already accepted him. Two, you said it was hard for Naruto to put all five elements into his Rasengan and that he had to put earth in last, however, he did it before and if I remember right, he did not put earth in first and it was easy for him to do. Third, Hiruzen said that he would be passing on the Fifth Hokage spot to Naruto granted he was still alive and yet he turned around and had Naruto go retrieve Tsunade to become the Fifth Hokage? That is kind of severely messed up. Next, why did Naruto not move into Minatos mansion? It is his by birthright and it was also made known that he is Minatos son. Moreover, I thought Jiraiya, Naruto, and Hinata were going on an extended training trip together so why did Shino get put on their team? That Makes no sense. Lastly, what happened to the seal screwing up?
Alright there is a few things I have noticed so far. One is an inconsistency. Naruto said earlier that only three people accepted him, their being Jiraiya, Hinata, and the Third. However, Hiashi had already accepted him. Two, you said it was hard for Naruto to put all five elements into his Rasengan and that he had to put earth in last, however, he did it before and if I remember right, he did not put earth in first and it was easy for him to do. Third, Hiruzen said that he would be passing on the Fifth Hokage spot to Naruto granted he was still alive and yet he turned around and had Naruto go retrieve Tsunade to become the Fifth Hokage? That is kind of severely messed up. Next, why did Naruto not move into Minatos mansion? It is his by birthright and it was also made known that he is Minatos son. Moreover, I thought Jiraiya, Naruto, and Hinata were going on an extended training trip together so why did Shino get put on their team? That Makes no sense. Lastly, what happened to the seal screwing up?
12/11/2015 c15 43satomika
Nice!
Although I would like to comment about Iruka not being present in Naruto's momentous events
Since I know that Iruka also accepted Naruto...?
43satomikaNice!
Although I would like to comment about Iruka not being present in Naruto's momentous events
Since I know that Iruka also accepted Naruto...?
9/26/2013 c14 dTalkingMeowthJ-Cat
Hinata would never be able to say 'I love you too' to Naruto, even if he said so. She will always go red :3
Hinata would never be able to say 'I love you too' to Naruto, even if he said so. She will always go red :3
3/11/2013 c15 Naruhinalover20
Nice story I remember this when I started to get in to fanfction where he made that ring and where he killed sasuke with that elemental rasesgan this was 1 of my fav when I was getting into
Nice story I remember this when I started to get in to fanfction where he made that ring and where he killed sasuke with that elemental rasesgan this was 1 of my fav when I was getting into
11/12/2012 c10 1RisingMist
This chapter was interesting to read a second time round. It tells me things more than it shows them to me, which is unlike your style now. Still, the chapter is good fun to read.
The flashbacks were interesting to read. Thankfully, they weren't overdone. The only thing that surprised me was that you had Naruto go into the two-tailed cloak mode unlike canon. Though, for Sasuke to be hurt like he was, it worked. It was also a bit odd to see Sakura and Sasuke hate Naruto for the fox. Still, that is plausible and it worked.
There was a mild lime here, but it wasn't much of one. I think you've really improved in that regard from this point. :)
The interaction between Naruto and Hinata was sweet, w/o being overdone. It worked well. The interaction between Naruto and Gaara though, felt like it moved juts a bit too fast. Gaara almost feels out of character in some sections here. However, I think it works as well as it does because you truly had Gaara fear for his life.
It is clear to me that your knowledge on elemental chakra has expanded greatly beyond this point too! lol!
I enjoyed the chapter a great deal. Thanks for writing it!
1RisingMistThis chapter was interesting to read a second time round. It tells me things more than it shows them to me, which is unlike your style now. Still, the chapter is good fun to read.
The flashbacks were interesting to read. Thankfully, they weren't overdone. The only thing that surprised me was that you had Naruto go into the two-tailed cloak mode unlike canon. Though, for Sasuke to be hurt like he was, it worked. It was also a bit odd to see Sakura and Sasuke hate Naruto for the fox. Still, that is plausible and it worked.
There was a mild lime here, but it wasn't much of one. I think you've really improved in that regard from this point. :)
The interaction between Naruto and Hinata was sweet, w/o being overdone. It worked well. The interaction between Naruto and Gaara though, felt like it moved juts a bit too fast. Gaara almost feels out of character in some sections here. However, I think it works as well as it does because you truly had Gaara fear for his life.
It is clear to me that your knowledge on elemental chakra has expanded greatly beyond this point too! lol!
I enjoyed the chapter a great deal. Thanks for writing it!