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4/22/2012 c5 rdmickey1989
You do exceptionally well at ensuring the reader is feeling what the characters feel. Many do not have that quality.

I am emotionally lost. Just like Bella. Existing, but barely.

So Edward came to Forks anyway, just watched from afar.

Dinner? What? Was I suppose to cook dinner? Darn. I was, but I am busy. Entranced into a story I have just begun. Hum. I think someone said Digiorno's is just like delivery. Yup pizza it is for supper.
4/22/2012 c4 rdmickey1989
Carlisle is treating him as I had hoped. As a true mentor, not someone to scold, but to help blossom in the right path.

So Alice is putting up a facade as well as Bella. That cannot last for long.

I am unsure Edward will be able to stay away until Thursday. I wouldn't no matter what she had said.
4/22/2012 c3 rdmickey1989
1. Bella is a much better person than I. Turn the other cheek, just isn't in my vocabulary. Not sure how she does it.

2. Edward did well to refrain and abide by her wishes. Again, not my personality.

3. He is going to buy her condo? mmmmmmm

4. Carlisle sees. Knows what is happening under his nose. He knows Edward well. Maybe he can guide him.
4/22/2012 c2 rdmickey1989
Edward is a saint. How can he understand and give her such attention. So attentive, but not smothering. Hum...think I must talk to hubs of 23 years.
4/22/2012 c1 rdmickey1989
I am finding it hard to articulate a response to chp 1. I have so many thoughts running through my head, so many emotions just in the first chapter. Not much of a review, I know. Perhaps coherent words will come on chp 2.

WOW
4/20/2012 c40 rubell
so in love with their story...
4/20/2012 c39 rubell
sorry i stopped reviewing, i cried through the last several chapters...no real way to translate sobbing onto a review...
4/20/2012 c31 rubell
it really was the both of them...i dont want to blame one or the other
4/20/2012 c30 rubell
ya just had to throw jacob in there didnt ya?
4/20/2012 c29 rubell
poor edward
4/20/2012 c28 rubell
geez! could you have screwed it up any more? good job edward!
4/20/2012 c27 rubell
not really sure why dorothy...but good luck edward...
4/20/2012 c26 rubell
i love that line! best naughty fic line ever in the history of the ficdom!
4/20/2012 c25 rubell
a week...doubt it, but it would be funny if they did and then she started her period, so it would be two weeks, lmao...
4/20/2012 c21 rubell
deep breath, willing edward to be calm...
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