8/29/2017 c2 7GinaDBrewer
What happened next? Who dies? What was the powder?

11/25/2015 c1 sandijgardner
Good so f ar

7/13/2015 c2 katy marks
Im really enjoying this fan fiction. I would love to see what happens between Gibbs and Jenny and also between Tony and Ziva in chapter three. I would also LOVE to know what Tony and Ziva have both contracted. I feel really sorry for Tony. A second time! Thats just plain bad luck on his behalf. And Ziva being infected too! Thats even more bad luck! She is going to make his life a living hell! I would like it to be anthrax, but I would absolutely love it if it we're a type of Plague. Either one will do. But I would still prefer if you chose The Bobonic Plague (Black Death) or the Pneumonic Plague, the more serious type of Plague known to us. I bet everybody wants to imagine the expressions on both Tony and Zivas' faces when they have contracted The Pneumonia Plauge. Well, in Tony's case the second time he has contracted the Plague. I would also love for their doctor to tell Tony that he might not make this one out alive a second time due to the amount on damage done with his previous bout with The Pneumonia Plague. PRICELESS!

3/10/2015 c2 Guest
Hello! Seriously! Hooked! Please please please! I know it has been forever but please finish it! Pleaseeee

10/29/2013 c2 luckyss
wow really good! it would be great if u could update this too!

4/10/2013 c2 Saosa
PLEASE this is to food for you to stop.

3/12/2013 c2 Anonymous
Please upload more