
6/18/2011 c3
2LucidChocolate
Poor Collin...hopefully the makeout session makes up for it! Haha. And Tara needs to go away. Like, now.

Poor Collin...hopefully the makeout session makes up for it! Haha. And Tara needs to go away. Like, now.
6/18/2011 c2 LucidChocolate
I love the dynamic of her with all of the guys! And then there's Collin...I wonder if he imprinted? And Maggie totally has a crush on Angie.
I love the dynamic of her with all of the guys! And then there's Collin...I wonder if he imprinted? And Maggie totally has a crush on Angie.
6/18/2011 c1 LucidChocolate
That's a nice little intro to Angie :)I just hope I don't get this Angie and Mike confused with Bella's friends Angie and Mike. I probably won't though, I've always been 1000 times more interested in the wolves than the vamps.
And the La Push "gang"...
Angie seems like a really interesting character, hanging out with five guys. I can't wait to see what happens next...
That's a nice little intro to Angie :)I just hope I don't get this Angie and Mike confused with Bella's friends Angie and Mike. I probably won't though, I've always been 1000 times more interested in the wolves than the vamps.
And the La Push "gang"...
Angie seems like a really interesting character, hanging out with five guys. I can't wait to see what happens next...
4/3/2011 c3 Brooklyns Finest Hufflepuff
Ok first off I LOVED THIS CHAPTER IT WAS AMAZING UPDATE SOON PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE and both scenes were good and they are moving too fast but it was still great
Ok first off I LOVED THIS CHAPTER IT WAS AMAZING UPDATE SOON PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE and both scenes were good and they are moving too fast but it was still great
4/3/2011 c3 NotInUse-DeletedAccount
It was perfect don't doubt your writing! So glad you updated :) awesome chapter and I kind of want to just get rid of Tara so Angie and Collin can be together!
It was perfect don't doubt your writing! So glad you updated :) awesome chapter and I kind of want to just get rid of Tara so Angie and Collin can be together!
4/3/2011 c3
70GASPLudwig
I think because the bathroom scene and the make Out scene were written absolutely PERFECTLY that noooooo they aren't moving too fast at all! DID I MENTION I LOVED THIS CHAPTER WITH ALL MY HEART!
IT FLIPPING AMAZING! AND HE LAST LINE! Q CLIFF HANGER OH THE SUSPENSE!

I think because the bathroom scene and the make Out scene were written absolutely PERFECTLY that noooooo they aren't moving too fast at all! DID I MENTION I LOVED THIS CHAPTER WITH ALL MY HEART!
IT FLIPPING AMAZING! AND HE LAST LINE! Q CLIFF HANGER OH THE SUSPENSE!
1/5/2011 c2 GASPLudwig
EKKK! I think it's safe to say that that chapter just made me WAY to happy Did i mention I LOVE this girl? And all the charracters really? And the whole skate park thing! XD Oh Merlin, I love the whole thing! IM SO EXCITED FOR MORE! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
EKKK! I think it's safe to say that that chapter just made me WAY to happy Did i mention I LOVE this girl? And all the charracters really? And the whole skate park thing! XD Oh Merlin, I love the whole thing! IM SO EXCITED FOR MORE! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
1/5/2011 c1 GASPLudwig
OH LAWD! THAT MADE ME INCREDIBALLY HAPPY! I LOVED ALL THE 'PUNCH IN FACE' REFERRENCES! IT WAS AMAZING! YOUR WRITING SOO GOOD TOO! AND I LOVED HOW YOU DID THE CHARRACTERS! OH OH OH! AND HOW I GOT LITTLE BITS OF INFO SUBTLY, WITHOUT YOU HAVING TO JUMP OUT AND SCREAM THEM! XD
OH LAWD! THAT MADE ME INCREDIBALLY HAPPY! I LOVED ALL THE 'PUNCH IN FACE' REFERRENCES! IT WAS AMAZING! YOUR WRITING SOO GOOD TOO! AND I LOVED HOW YOU DID THE CHARRACTERS! OH OH OH! AND HOW I GOT LITTLE BITS OF INFO SUBTLY, WITHOUT YOU HAVING TO JUMP OUT AND SCREAM THEM! XD
12/12/2010 c2 Guest
Umm yeah this is amazing.just so you know.I'm super excited for your next update so make it soon!
Umm yeah this is amazing.just so you know.I'm super excited for your next update so make it soon!
12/4/2010 c2 Brooklyns Finest Hufflepuff
ummmmmm i loved it are the boys gonna phase cuz that would be awesome
ummmmmm i loved it are the boys gonna phase cuz that would be awesome
12/4/2010 c2 NotInUse-DeletedAccount
Loved the new chapter :) i really want to find out what is going to go on between Maggie and Collin! :D please update soon :)
Loved the new chapter :) i really want to find out what is going to go on between Maggie and Collin! :D please update soon :)
12/3/2010 c1
7AFlairForSelfishSkies
Great story =)Yeah I reviewed 'cause I don't like it when people don't review it's like you have 40 hits but only 3 reviews suxz huh?People lazy this days anyways great start

Great story =)Yeah I reviewed 'cause I don't like it when people don't review it's like you have 40 hits but only 3 reviews suxz huh?People lazy this days anyways great start
12/3/2010 c1 NotInUse-DeletedAccount
I loveddd it! The only way you could improve it is by maybe...I don't know...writing a bit more :P :D :D please update soon :D
I loveddd it! The only way you could improve it is by maybe...I don't know...writing a bit more :P :D :D please update soon :D